Four ponies survived the viral outbreak that wiped out the pony race and caused some to come back as mutants that walk the streets at night. But this virus has a dark backstory and everything might not be a it seems.
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nicely done sir, this story was almost copied but letting it be people scattered around is a great idea. cheers
I love this story! I will be telling all my friends about this! I hope you get more likes soon!
Good story idea to start, and it has me interested. However, there were a few errors throughout. If you would like a proofreader to help with that, I would help you out.
this looks like itll be good
Is this based off of the game?
*hears of the game, comes here, searches the title, sees this, thinks: hm, HOPE ITS LIKE THE GAME!*
I like this already. MOOORE!!!
cool
yay new chapter yay
oh and i might be able to try to d some cover art for you but no promises
Cant wait for the next chapter! if your looking for errors, then at the beginning, where he took his weapons, it said "with a crossbow in his hands". Just to let you know
sorry if I sound like a nuisance.
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You're not a nuisance. Thanks for pointing that out for me.
To himself.
That aside, this looks quite interesting. I shall read it.
Kindly,
~Sinrar
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Thanks for pointing that mistake out.
going to maine?
dont let the meta catch you.
Don't think I don't see what you did there with 'Cloud Flicker'. That's wordplay for 'clicker', ain't it?
you need to update more if you write such short chapters
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Yeah sorry about that. I'm just having some trouble coming up with ideas. I'll make sure to start posting chapters more often.
OHHHH WHAT YOUR DOING I SEE THA
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Wait..... what?
this story needs more cranberry juice
2986602
And what is that supposed to mean?
2986602 i agree. and lots of applesauce
2986754 You heard me MORE CRANBERRY JUICE
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What does that mean!!!
2989468 JUICE GIVE THEM CRANBERRY JUICE
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NO!
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YES
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I AM NOT GIVING THEM CRANBERRY JUICE AND THAT'S FINAL!
3001773 you don't *sniff* have to be so mean about it.
Still needs cranberry juice
Harassment = progress
Now how about some pancakes....
I didn't ask for this.
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Ask for what?
Climbing in yo window snatching up yo stuff so hid yo water hide yo food and hide yo journal
THAT IS FUCKING CREEPY!
Cloud Flicker slept peacefully for the first time in months. She woke up
Isn't Cloud Flicker a guy?
"but I guess now was a good a time as ever."
umm, isn't this story in third person? because this sentence is in first person; also, shouldn't one of these "a"s be an "as"?
"The door was lucked"
-Sorry for nitpicking and such.
"poured Cloud her cranberry juice and handed it to her."
"As the two were crossing an intersection out of the corner of her eye thought she saw a pony wearing a radiation suit. She turned her head suddenly to see an open manhole and a pony quickly jumping into it down the sewers."
Yeah, I'm pretty sure both of our main characters here are male, also, those sentences just don't quite sound right; does anyone know why?
Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Cranberry Juice?