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The moon may be a lonely, desolate place, but there, two ponies can meet, spend years together, and learn to love and understand one another. One might be a goddess, powerful and strong-willed, and the other a mere earth pony, with little gift other than music, but after looking deeper, they might find more in common than they once thought.
Blatant Nightmare Moon x Octavia ship inbound!
A Fanfic Jointly written by Belgerum and Flutter Bully
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An odd shipping indeed but one that's not welcome. I enjoyed this and hope I see more of this. ^^ I've seen a Luna/Octy shipping but never have I seen a nightmare moon/octy shipping.
Keep it up.
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Indeed it is an odd shipping. That's part of why this is the first of many stories I've started that I actually decided to go through with and post. Also, Flutter Bully helped me kinda. XP Thanks.
2793356 Heh like I said. ^^ Keep up the good work! I wanna see more of this! It's already sounding rather interesting!
Actually, sauciness usually is the same as sauciness, so one of those should probably be changed to sassiness. Also, in Chapter 2, you didn't capitalize the 'Moon' in Nightmare Moon a few times. Other than that, this is a great story, and it really needs more likes.
Story seems nice, but I have one question.
How can there be air to breath on the moon, is not only alicorn able to survive on the moon ?
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fix'd. Thanks for telling me.
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Don't look too far into it. I could have rambled on and on in the story bout how Octavia can survive without breathing, eating, or drinking in extremely low temperatures, but that would be boring material and wouldn't be very believable anyway.
So I'll just say "magic"and leave it at that.
the other two chapters were quite frankly great, but I fear you've lost some steam with this one;
Octavia's attack on Nightmare Moon's person seems....premature, and/or unjustified.
It is one thing to be kissed on the nose, and another to accuse the only other being you're going to share your existence with of not being worthy of anything.
Thoughts? :-/
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Octavia wasn't upset at the kiss, so much as Nightmare comparing or relating her to a whore (even if it was an attempt at complimenting her) and that's what really set her off. Octavia is too high-class and dignified to be related to a common prostitute! Your comment is respected, and input appreciated though!
(PS: This is guy #2 working on this collaborative fanfic, lol)
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Most people follow Science Woona and say "Because Magic"
They should have sent Octy and Nightmare a bed each.
So...does Celestia just have a Hunger Games style draft for who gets sent to the Moon?
My little nightmare moon my little Angel of darkness!
good overall but was sort of lost when Octavia unloaded and said all that to Nightmare Moon. These two are the best out of all others hope to read more.
So sad it got cancelled.