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Written for the TwiLuna contest.
At the edge of the world, up high where the blue and the black merge, two ponies watch the stars and pass the time annoying each other. It's the third year anniversary of their first kiss and Luna has a gift for Twilight that only she could give. Twilight freakstakes it characteristically well.
If this makes it to the Feature Box I will eat my hat.
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Twi, chill. Luna's got this.
Oh finally! The Sun, the Moon and The Twilight.
I am unnaturally excited seeing that actual acronym, since i'd come up with it in my mind like the third entry in.
Edit- Now that i've read the chapter, i can't help but agree with Twilight. I mean two moons? That'd be as bad as like... a double rainbow, or something.
And now i can't stop imagining Celestia doing something very similar. Twin suns, and now i'm thinking Equestria is on Tatooine. On the side of the world they never showed.
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hehe. It'll be somewhat worse than a double rainbow. All the way across the sky or not.
I can't decide if I should ship this with my own Royal Observation Cloud, or just imagine that they're the same and it's undergone some upgrades
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That would be quite the crackship.
I see them more as frienemies. Like they're at different ends of equestrian airspace and try to out observe each other in a senpai-please-notice-me kinda race.
Viewed, upvoted and commented in hopes of a hat-eating.
I like the worldbuilding, but I should warn you that I will most definitely NOT be stealing this for the origins of Harshwhinnia. Everypony knows that that was made from the sweat and tears of the world's top athletic competitors, compressed into crystal by Harshwhinny's own mighty hooves and bucked into the sky. That was how she earned her princesscorning and triplecorning (respectively).
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OMBA!!! LUther comentd on my story! FIMFICtion Acheevment unlock!!
Wait, so was the crystallization of the sweat and tears the achievement for her princesscorning, and then bucking said crystal into the sky the separate achievement for her triplecorning?
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Luna just better be glad she's a horse and so won't ever lose her vegan powers.
Twilight's Thought Process Checklist
- Intense thinking? ✔
- Realization? ✔
- Freakout? ✔
- Acceptance? ✘
The writer 'bats' once made a similar promise with the outcome of him eating a hat.
Well, I made the box within hours of posting my story. Don't see why you wouldnt either. What is your hat made of? Would you need something to go with it?
But I have to say I agree with Twilight. Two moons? seriously? Did Discord have something to do with this?!
Nicely done!
lease be a dear and bring together all the UHAGSOC-verse stories into one collection. Maybe just paste them together into a single longer doc, with {HR} breaks between, and post separately or even insert them here as Chapter Zero / Prologue. They're too much fun to lose in the maelstrom of the prompt tag collab.
Also, I owed you a follow from the first time I read Pony Dreams but somehow missed it, so here, have one of those too.
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That's a good idea. After I write the Epilogue to these 2 chapters, I think I'll do that.
An update within a week of a previous post?
What is this madness?!
Huzzah! The moon has been doubled!
Yo dawg, We heard Thou likest Our moon, so We put a moon behind the moon!
Now We shall moon thee!
Cuuuuuute.
That was absolutely adorable. This, right here, is why TwiLuna is so epic.
Well....
Magic must have been involved.
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That's my guess
heh, Celestia has a heart attack from the news of her sister's pregnancy. Go figure.
And thus the sun was conquered not with war but with joy.
And that's how the UHAGSOC ended up with a maternity ward and a nursery. Also, if that was the Epilogue, should this now be marked "Complete"?
3875309 But I wanna see the Bebe! BABY time yay! ...oh god, if they're still around... 'Cutie Mark Crusader Baby Sitters! YAY!!'
So this makes Twilight the dominant one in the relationship?
next, we need da bebe story
You need to make this its own proper overarching story at some point. I wouldn't know how one would go about that, however.
Hm.. well I tried to make you eat it. I did upvote your story and favorite it.
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You tried and that is what counts.
I think I would have fried it in a butter sauce, then dipped the resulting 'hat chips' in ranch dressing, or hot sauce.
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Go with the hot sauce. It might help cover up the taste better I think.
I would love to see some stuff about the foal. Two alicorns for parents with ideas about child rearing a full millennium apart.
my only problem with this story is how it's centered in the middle instead of to the left, it's hard to follow like that.
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gdocs+the indent paragraph function on this site are to blame.
Plus I'm lazy.
horrible use of latin not sure what you meant it to mean
also this seems liek a dark cloud 2 reference what with 2 moons and all
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I blame Google Translate. I think I meant something along the lines of "Don't insult me after I apologized."
5681107 thats what i figured you meant that or Dont apologize after insulting me
Aw, they do make such a cute couple...!
I know that I stumbled upon this story before, twice even, if I'm not mistaken. I just didn't read it. Don't know why, though. Maybe the chapter titles scared me off? Anyway - it was a nice little thing. Would be interesting to see how Shining and Cadence took the news, or their parents. Or Spike. Huh. Where's Spike anyway...?
Thank you.
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It doesn't really affect the story, but I liked to think Spike was off with Shining and Cadance, helping them in the Crystal Empire because Twi was spending so much time in the clouds. I would assume that he and Shining and Cadance would all be happy, if perhaps a little confused as to how it all happened.
This was a fun series to write back when the Twiluna collab was...less dead. At times I'd like to continue it, but at this point I have plenty of other projects, Twiluna included, to work on.
I'd love to see an ongoing story with this idea.
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If I get back into the Twiluna prompts, I'd totally continue to place them in this continuity. I just haven't read any good space articles that have grabbed my attention recently.