• Published 28th Sep 2011
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Summer Flight Camp - Flutterwhy4



Rape, Fluttershy x Hoops & Dumb-Bell, Fluttershy x Rainbow Dash

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#1 · Sep 28th, 2011 · · ·

nothin' brightens day like good ol' flutterrape. :moustache:

#2 · Sep 28th, 2011 · · ·

Eh. no build up to the scene at the end so i feel kinda let down. Like there could have been more maybe 2-3 chapters. However it was a well written clopfic and i enjoyed it thoroughly. Well done. :twilightsmile:

:fluttershysad:.....:fluttercry:.....:raritydespair:.......:raritycry:

"So, I watched you get raped earlier... Wanna fuck?"

Loved the plot. Despite the boys taking advantage of Fluttershy in the beginning,I can't say that I was not kind of..."turned on" by it.:twilightblush: But I loved the ending,nothing better than some FlutterDash!

Love the plot overall,keep up the excellent work!:heart:

#6 · Oct 14th, 2011 · · ·

:fluttershysad:
:rainbowderp:
:fluttercry:
:rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::rainbowkiss:
:fluttercry:

#7 · Oct 23rd, 2011 · · ·

i clopped to this dear sir. :moustache:

I would love a good clopfic that continued off of this where fluttershy got pregnant because of this. :raritywink:

I'm a horrible person for saying that, I know, I know.:moustache:

This was...... quite exceptional... :derpyderp1:

This was awesome, and as my personality always says to me "RAPE AND GRIMDARK/GRIMSHIPPING ALWAYS APPROVED/LOVED/FAVED etc NO MATTER WHAT", now I know im kind of fucked up in the head, but i LIKE it:raritywink:

This was well done I think she should get pregnant....
I'm terrible for saying that I know.....BUT I LUVS IT!!!!!

#12 · Dec 29th, 2011 · · ·

This was well done I think she should get pregnant....
I'm terrible for saying that I know.....BUT I LUVS IT!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

#13 · Jan 6th, 2012 · · ·

I read this late night, clopped to it then fell asleep. Next thing i know i reading the rest of it on the way to the way to my high school...just glad i didn't clop on the way there lol

Mystery Magic Theater 3000!

Dumb-Bell watched as his friend ate the yellow pony out. "So, bananas... do you like them?" :ajsmug:

Both of these colts had erections that could hold up a building at this point. "Well, now I know where to build my next house!" :pinkiehappy:

She reached down and pet Rainbow Dash on the head "Brushie, brushie, brushie" :rainbowkiss:

Honestly this would be a decent porno..... without the underage pony rape although I did just read it DAMNIT:facehoof:

not a bad story, only that horses/ponies/etc don't have a hymen:rainbowhuh:

FlutterDash FOREVER!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Sluttershy, indeed:moustache:

first I was like :fluttercry: then I was like :rainbowhuh: and then i was just like :pinkiehappy:

very clopy i liked it:heart::heart::heart::heart:

344979 *Insert Discord laugh here*

...Characters that are being forced into oral sex, you do know that you can, You know, BITE DOWN! Make them infertile! Have them regret the day they decided that you were an easy target!

...Also, yet another reason that I will eventually buy a gun and keep it on me at all times.

920459 Fluttershy is totally the type of character that would bite somepony's cock off afterall. :rainbowwild:

920468 Which would you take: Being OOC and making the fans that are on a higher plane of existence than you rage, or be raped?

Me personally? Well, it can't be rape if you're willing. :pinkiehappy:

I fapped ... i feel guilty :3

Wow, there was once guests on this site... also I'm surprised...Oddly surprised

Not bad, not bad at all. I am glad that you made Hoops and Dumb-Bell at least kind of gentle with Fluttershy. I liked how Dash and Fluttershy....bonded. That was good. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the great writing!

I came
I saw the filly Fluttershy pic
I read rape in the comments
I said "nope"
I left.

2440281 really? A rape fic? You're here!!??

2708589
Yeah...I have a wide variety of tastes...:twilightsheepish:

2709563 okay? Hey check this out

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2712475
Unholy hell. That was epic. Now, when do you want to get back to writing?
EDIT: It's Daring Do! My GOSH!

2712490 we can start planning now if you feel like it...

2712540
Yes, go there now.

2712587 get your ass on there NOW!

Block paragraphs make reading this hard. [Insert Penis joke]

I just read this out loud on my microphone. It'll be on YouTube soon. This was the first fic I picked for my new Clopfictions channel. Congrats Flutterwhy4.

You need to leave a new paragraph when a new character speaks.
Other than that, everything's fine. Have an upvote and a fav. :raritywink:

25078 yes you have. It will be ready for you shortly...

2700939 your spot has been reserved for you in my sector of hell. ( I won it in a card game with the devil, don't ask) it will be even more hellish than you could immagine, even after reading this.

Not even looking at comment timesyet but

LAST

CALLED IT BIACH

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