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That_Random_Pony
Sometimes I wonder why I write. Then I look back at my stories and remember: I have a story to tell. And a LOT of mistakes to correct.
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I think it's pretty well written. Keep it going.
The plot thickens. (pun intended)
Yay! picnic!
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2548969 agreed
I like to see a good plot in the making and I'm hoping ya won't let me down. Keep it up and I'll keep reading!
ummmm..... More please?
I feel bad for strong, no house, no check. Oh and
Did he do what I think he just did?
Good good. I wonder how the clop will be...
Great story. Please kill off the Green Mane Stallion.
is an update coming for this story and I Hate Decisions (Think i spelt that wrong sorry)
This was pretty good but...
Maregina? Really? C'mon, not every word needs to be ponified.
Maregina?
3288446>>3291281 Sorry! I read this term in several clopfics I was… analyzing. Fixed, and I'll not be using that again.
Wow. Just wow. Few fics have such a big impact on me. I can't get over how incredible this story is. The story is great, the pacing is perfect, and the characters are phenomenal. The clop is great, too, without being awkward, but that's not even why I read this story. THIS is why I come to FimFiction. THIS is why I read fan fics. I can't wait for an update. The ending is going to be bittersweet, because as much as I'll enjoy it, it'll be sad to see the story end. Wonderful, wonderful job. Liked, faved, and followed.
3315626 THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!
I'm glad the back stories for both characters turned out so great. A few grammar and spelling errors and an oh-so-slightly rushed pace aren't enough to take away from this fantastic work. Also, I want to thank you personally for making the distinction between the acts of making love and having sex. It seems so obvious now, how did I not see it before? I await the final chapter.
Wen will it continue????
Your so right Pinkie! Asking him would be too mainstream, obviously!
You know it a public library right? You could just walk right in...
4652678 WELL, do you know a library open at 12 at night?
O_O... Wut?
This going to get a final chapter? It's a pleasant story to read.
4848519 I am VERY sorry about not updating, but I want to edit the first few chapters (since I've had more experience and now I can write it a bit more correctly). And… I'm very anxious as to what my first published clop chapter will be like. But don't worry! I am already starting on that!
4849017 You're assuming I am grumpy about it being such a long time.
I was just asking out of curiosity, seeing as you have other stories going. I'm only working on one story myself but have stretches I can't seem to come up with something to write. It happens. Multiple stories, divided by available free time to write and multiplied by inspiration for it, will of course have ample opportunity to delay things.
If you worry so much about how you'll get the scene done, you might try looking at a soapy shower photo shoot scene in "The Model's Secretary" here on FF. I'm not sure what it was, but I need to study it myself for the subtle cues. It wasn't even naughty and it was hot.
Just keep up the good works.
well i'm pleased with this story and looking forward to the next chapter
stay classy
4652740 Believe it or not, yes. And please refrain from asking about the deleted comments. Minor...glitches.
*ahem*
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HOLY MOTHER OF FUCK! YOU FINISHED THIS STORY! GOOD FUCKITY GOD I'D ALREADY ACCEPTED THAT THIS STORY WOULD NEVER BE COMPLETED! AAAAAAAAAAGHGHGHGHGHGHGHAHGHGHG!
*ahem*
Wow. Seeing the final chapter posted made my day. You sir, made my day. Okay, now that my little moment is over, I can actually talk about this.
Simply put, I'm going to need to reread the entire story again. I do remember several of the general ideas, but a lot of the details have escaped me. Nothing to blame except the huge lull in updates.
But I did enjoy the intimacy of the two. I guess I'm a little disappointed that the erotica was so brief, but for its length, it was well paced and written. Taking a trip down memory lane, if I'm not mistaken, this was the first MLP story that I read to star an OC. I really lucked out since Strong is a very well developed character, falling into neither the "Gary Stu" category, nor the "blatant self-insert" category.
This story has stayed with me since I first read it over a year ago, and it will continue to do so. This is a story worth reading again, and no matter how differently I may see it now, it will always have a special place in my heart (and on my bookshelf, thanks to knighty's update). So maybe now you'll understand my extremely immature initial reaction. This story's ending is sweet, but bittersweet for me personally. I'm happy to see its completion, but sad to see it go. Thank you for writing this, and for leaving a lasting impact on at least one person.
your shenanigans were well worth it, you did not disappoint
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stay classy
5384095 Really? University library or what?
Why that green maned BASTARD!!!
Aaaaaaaaawwwwwwww!!
That's Adorable!!!
Y'know, with them practically rutting each other's brains out in the end.
Reminds me of another story where Twi falls for an OC named Arkenstone in the Savage Skies Series! Buuuuut without all the mature rated content.
But yea!
I thought this story was amazing!
Definitely making it on to my favs list, but let's be honest... What doesn't go on my friends list!
Great story. Now if you'd excuse me " grabs silver sub machine gun and trench knife" I'm going to hunt that @$&$79$ that hurt twilight.
I loved it and it may be from 2013 but it was amazing