I'm glad the back stories for both characters turned out so great. A few grammar and spelling errors and an oh-so-slightly rushed pace aren't enough to take away from this fantastic work. Also, I want to thank you personally for making the distinction between the acts of making love and having sex. It seems so obvious now, how did I not see it before? I await the final chapter.

Wen will it continue????

This going to get a final chapter? It's a pleasant story to read.

4848519 I am VERY sorry about not updating, but I want to edit the first few chapters (since I've had more experience and now I can write it a bit more correctly). And… I'm very anxious as to what my first published clop chapter will be like. But don't worry! I am already starting on that!

4849017 You're assuming I am grumpy about it being such a long time.

I was just asking out of curiosity, seeing as you have other stories going. I'm only working on one story myself but have stretches I can't seem to come up with something to write. It happens. Multiple stories, divided by available free time to write and multiplied by inspiration for it, will of course have ample opportunity to delay things.

If you worry so much about how you'll get the scene done, you might try looking at a soapy shower photo shoot scene in "The Model's Secretary" here on FF. I'm not sure what it was, but I need to study it myself for the subtle cues. It wasn't even naughty and it was hot.

Just keep up the good works.

well i'm pleased with this story and looking forward to the next chapter

stay classy