Thanks muchly for all the positive feedback and all the favouriting of Lyra x Lyra.
Chapter 2 is in progress — probably around half way done. It's going to be a lot longer than chapter 1, perhaps as long as 6000 words, and will contain two interleaved story lines, following Lyra's arrival in the human world, and Bon Bon and Twilight Sparkle's activities back in Equestria.