Today’s story relies on not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is incredibly blunt, I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.
I don’t like catering to holidays, but here’s a review for Halloween anyway. Any time is a good time to review Dark fic.
Title: Just A Simple Story
Last time, a reporter showed up at the police station, asking about the deaths, Cameron denies the existence of a supernatural serial killer, but tells the reporter to tell people not to pray. Cameron then goes and sees Kirkland, who is drunk and blaming himself for failing to save the victims.
Hey there! I am Coffee Latte, but Coffee is just as fine to call me. I decided that it would be a fun thing for me to not only create and produce well-written stories, but also act as a reviewer. I find that when it comes to erotic stories, ponies are fine with sacrificing good plots and smut for boring, unoriginal ideas of 'X thrusts into Y' or some form of that idea. Realism takes a backseat, and I think that with such of diverse cast of characters on the show, they would be able to find
If [OPEN], I am accepting new requests. If [CLOSED], I am working on other things (check back later 
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If you follow me, then you are likely aware of my ongoing review series. In order to mix things up a little, I am now taking requests for stories to review. Like everything in life, there are some caveats:
*Only request reviews for one of your own stories.
Hello my lovely readers. First of all, I want to thank each and every one of you for being incredible, amazing people who've been supporting me and my stories for a long time, for some of you since I first started posting IHW back in October of 2020. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Note: If you just want the skinny, skip to the TLDR.
Some see 13 as unlucky, others, the opposite. I'm not feeling well, so I might try to summarize this more than usual.
In our last review, Cameron had sex with Christina Urbain, then the two of them went to the house of the babysitter, where Gabriel cut the power, broke in, and killed the sitter, Karen, while indicating that he was going after Joseph as well.
Life goes on, and so do we. Just how we do it is no mystery.
It's been a while since I did my last part in the series. But recently, I saw something that encouraged this installment. A tweet pointing out what someone said 10 months prior. On November 25th 2022, Fluttercheer made a blog post on this site about Save MLP and sent a message about how supporters of that group don't deserve to read his fanfics. On September 24th 2023, the leader of the Save MLP group
This may be a potential scene in my fanfic but for now its just practice.
Henchman and Laetum were at sugarcube corner at night helping pinkie pie finish a batch of cupcakes for the school of friendship's one year anniversary. Henchman steps out to take a breath of fresh air until He hears something in the darkness and sees Orion.
“Hey Henchman.” called Pinkie Pie, “can you grab me some of those sprinkles on the top shelf please?”
I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. This is especially true of fanfiction, where many writers are still learning and improving. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less. All of these stories were found via the featured or popular boxes. Unlinked stories are rated M and are extremely NSFW: they may be found via the author links.
Hey, guys. Apparently there is this quiz going around FIMFiction. I'm going to do it, but instead of me actually doing it, I'm going to have 'The Critique' do it instead. Since tomorrow is another review, I figured I'd give you guys an extra day of his antics. So, let me know what you think. Anyway, enjoy.
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Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.
Hello, everypony! I am the Critique.
I have compiled four points, or aspects, which I think provide the most assistance when you’re trying to improve on any activity you set your mind to. Most of this will be skewed towards writing, but I think the principles can be applied to many other things as well. I think they are all important in becoming better at whatever you put your mind to. I will give a quick overview of each, then go into details below.
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