A few days ago I submitted The Princess That Equestria Always Had to Equestria Daily, and today I got a response.

This blog will be quite long, but I ask you to read it and respond with your own thoughts on the critiques mentioned. I really would like this to appear on EQD one day. It's the fic I'm most proud of, and the one I've spent the most time cultivating.

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Here's the second entry to the Villain Critique on the same day. As always, let's get started with the rules:

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The following is my own critique of the most recent story arc of The Conquering of Love. It will contain very slight spoilers for the two as-of-yet unreleased chapters, but nothing truly spoileriffic. While this blog has to do with The Conquering of Love, it is more about my own look back on the story's evolution from initial thoughts to execution. As such, I have not tagged the story in this blog post, but I will be linking it in the author's notes at the end of the next chapter when it

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So, I've been given the dubious honor of being one of the judges in the Incest is Wincest Contest. When Shake first asked me if I wanted to be a judge, I was a little baffled at first. Why me, one of the hardest to please and most critical, bitter husks of a human being that ever walked the Earth? Perhaps that was part of the point. For me, good clop is about more than just wet slapping

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Another CMC-Sisters ep? I think we haven't focused on these six since Sleepless in Ponyville. Cool.

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Time for MLP to shatter and confirm our headcanons in equal doses once more.

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Pony is at its best when it does new and creative things. And its often as its worst when it falls onto predictable stock plots.

How meta this episode is.

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Time to give one of the most worthless characters on the show something to do at last.

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Hey people, I've finally finished my rough draft of STANT chapter 6 (sexy time included), and I'd very much like someone to look over it before I put it up for all to critique.

If you're interested, PM me and I'll send you the link to the gDoc.

This is the first time I've ever written something like what's in this chapter, and I'm a little self-conscious... Ok I'm super self-conscious about this.

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Three Rarity episodes three weeks in a row, eh? Okey dokey. First, liking the continuity with Rainbow Dash and the Wonderbolt Reserves, it's like the writers heard me. No, I don't care if animation lead time means they had the episode in the can before my review. Also I appreciate they included Sassy and the new boutique at the start, continuity is good. And throughout the episode Rainbow is so friggin' adorable. The film noir was a lot of fun and it was cool that some guards actually played a

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Stayed up on my night shift sleep cycle to enjoy this one with a chat.

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It's been forever since I even thought about this story, but a user linked me to an extensive critique he made about this story. If you got time, I HIGHLY recommend giving it a look. It breaks the story down piece by piece, informing us in a fair, objective critique about how each aspect of Fallout: Equestria fails.

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This deconstructive critique thingy was done at the behest of Weatherbug. Be it through snow or sleet, rain or hail, the Meat delivers without fail.
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Today I must remind myself comments are for commenting. Good and bad. Long or short. Those that criticize and those that point out something ironic/amusing/WTF?!?. I have never shied away from any as long as they weren't hate filled, overly spammy, or so confusing that I had no idea what they were trying to say... It is the nature of putting whatever you create(Like a fan fiction) out there for people to see...

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Hey there, everyone. Because I and possibly others out there want to improve on each other's characterizations and writing, I've decided to create a new series that can help with that. It's called OC Critique Request. Either and/or others send our OC's to me and you guys get to critique them if needed. I also did this because I was bored and wanted to know if the OC's hold up. They will be critiqued through any aspect the critic(s) choose: appearance, personality, history, abilities,

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Time to wrap up the season (for me, anyway)

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Remember Season 1 when Pinkie and Rainbow bond over their love of pranks? Well 5 seasons later, so did our new writer.

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Well, hi.

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Fluttershy DOES have a family!

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