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Feb
28th
2016

Response from EQD · 8:04pm Feb 28th, 2016

A few days ago I submitted The Princess That Equestria Always Had to Equestria Daily, and today I got a response.

This blog will be quite long, but I ask you to read it and respond with your own thoughts on the critiques mentioned. I really would like this to appear on EQD one day. It's the fic I'm most proud of, and the one I've spent the most time cultivating.

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Report rillegas08 · 114 views · #critique #criticism
Aug
18th
2015

In Retrospect: Thoughts on "Crash Down" Now That It Is Almost Done · 3:14am Aug 18th, 2015

The following is my own critique of the most recent story arc of The Conquering of Love. It will contain very slight spoilers for the two as-of-yet unreleased chapters, but nothing truly spoileriffic. While this blog has to do with The Conquering of Love, it is more about my own look back on the story's evolution from initial thoughts to execution. As such, I have not tagged the story in this blog post, but I will be linking it in the author's notes at the end of the next chapter when it

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Report Littlecolt · 155 views · #self-critique
May
8th
2019

On Incest · 8:43pm May 8th, 2019

So, I've been given the dubious honor of being one of the judges in the Incest is Wincest Contest. When Shake first asked me if I wanted to be a judge, I was a little baffled at first. Why me, one of the hardest to please and most critical, bitter husks of a human being that ever walked the Earth? Perhaps that was part of the point. For me, good clop is about more than just wet slapping

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Report xRei · 202 views · #Incest #Critique
Aug
6th
2016

The Cart Before the Ponies S6E14 Review · 7:37pm Aug 6th, 2016

Another CMC-Sisters ep? I think we haven't focused on these six since Sleepless in Ponyville. Cool.

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Aug
20th
2016

Times They Are A Changeling S6E16 Review · 9:50pm Aug 20th, 2016

Time for MLP to shatter and confirm our headcanons in equal doses once more.

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Jun
11th
2016

Spice Up Your Life S6E12 Recap · 4:04pm Jun 11th, 2016

Pony is at its best when it does new and creative things. And its often as its worst when it falls onto predictable stock plots.

How meta this episode is.

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Sep
3rd
2016

Buckball Season S6E18 Review · 8:42pm Sep 3rd, 2016

Time to give one of the most worthless characters on the show something to do at last.

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Jun
18th
2016

Chapter review requested · 4:20am Jun 18th, 2016

Hey people, I've finally finished my rough draft of STANT chapter 6 (sexy time included), and I'd very much like someone to look over it before I put it up for all to critique.

If you're interested, PM me and I'll send you the link to the gDoc.

This is the first time I've ever written something like what's in this chapter, and I'm a little self-conscious... Ok I'm super self-conscious about this.:fluttershysad:

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Report Lyruil · 237 views · #update #critique #mature
Jul
12th
2015

UPDATE: July 7th, 2015 - Suggestions On Stories · 4:42pm Jul 12th, 2015

Feb
4th
2020

My Writing Journey (and an opportunity for YOU) · 8:26am February 4th

This is probably a longshot, but if any of my followers who still read my blog posts want to submit their writing for a critique/narration/plug please see the link below

THIS IS THE LINK

Sep
13th
2015

Canterlot Boutique Review · 12:54am Sep 13th, 2015

MLP is at its dullest when you can call the ending less than halfway through the episode, and at its worst when the plot hinges on a character acting like an idiot... this is one of those episodes. So I guess it's a testament to skill that this episode avoids being awful. It's just bland and boring, yet not forgettable.

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Oct
10th
2016

Top Bolt Review S6E24 · 5:18pm Oct 10th, 2016

Time to wrap up the season (for me, anyway)

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Aug
13th
2016

28 Pranks Later S6E15 Review · 4:00pm Aug 13th, 2016

Remember Season 1 when Pinkie and Rainbow bond over their love of pranks? Well 5 seasons later, so did our new writer.

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Jan
1st
2017

2016 was so last year · 5:21pm Jan 1st, 2017

Well, hi.

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Report Casca · 372 views · #review #critique #lyfe #update
Mar
23rd
2016

THE CRITIQUE'S SECOND YEAR ANNIVERSARY · 8:19pm Mar 23rd, 2016

Jun
4th
2016

Flutter Brutter S6E11 Recap · 4:03pm Jun 4th, 2016

Fluttershy DOES have a family!

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May
28th
2016

Applejack's Day Off S6E10 Recap · 4:05pm May 28th, 2016

So nice of them to give a background pony a starring episode.

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Aug
25th
2018

Next Chapter Updates · 4:21am Aug 25th, 2018

I'm writing the next chapter as of now. Is still about 20 percent finished:twilightsheepish: and I hope I can post in in the next two weeks.

So while you wait:

Tell me your thoughts of what Love Degree has been so far. I would like to know your thoughts, opinions or emotions about it.

:heart:

May
21st
2016

The Saddle Row Review S6E9 Recap · 4:09pm May 21st, 2016

Rarity time! Who has money on the drama pool?

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May
11th
2016

Critique Review: Retribution · 7:32pm May 11th, 2016


Another fic, another chance for me to go outside with an ice cream bowl, hoping that the mystical Cookies ‘n Cream will fall from the heavens and present itself before me. Only to realize, a few bites in, that it’s actually pigeon shit.

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