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Feb
28th
2016

Response from EQD · 8:04pm Feb 28th, 2016

A few days ago I submitted The Princess That Equestria Always Had to Equestria Daily, and today I got a response.

This blog will be quite long, but I ask you to read it and respond with your own thoughts on the critiques mentioned. I really would like this to appear on EQD one day. It's the fic I'm most proud of, and the one I've spent the most time cultivating.

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Report rillegas08 · 280 views · #critique #criticism
Mar
4th
2022

Villain Critique: Dimentio from Super Paper Mario · 4:56pm Mar 4th, 2022

Here's the second entry to the Villain Critique on the same day. As always, let's get started with the rules:

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Aug
18th
2015

In Retrospect: Thoughts on "Crash Down" Now That It Is Almost Done · 3:14am Aug 18th, 2015

The following is my own critique of the most recent story arc of The Conquering of Love. It will contain very slight spoilers for the two as-of-yet unreleased chapters, but nothing truly spoileriffic. While this blog has to do with The Conquering of Love, it is more about my own look back on the story's evolution from initial thoughts to execution. As such, I have not tagged the story in this blog post, but I will be linking it in the author's notes at the end of the next chapter when it

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Report Littlecolt · 330 views · #self-critique
May
8th
2019

On Incest · 8:43pm May 8th, 2019

So, I've been given the dubious honor of being one of the judges in the Incest is Wincest Contest. When Shake first asked me if I wanted to be a judge, I was a little baffled at first. Why me, one of the hardest to please and most critical, bitter husks of a human being that ever walked the Earth? Perhaps that was part of the point. For me, good clop is about more than just wet slapping

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Report xRei · 611 views · #Incest #Critique
Aug
6th
2016

The Cart Before the Ponies S6E14 Review · 7:37pm Aug 6th, 2016

Another CMC-Sisters ep? I think we haven't focused on these six since Sleepless in Ponyville. Cool.

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Aug
20th
2016

Times They Are A Changeling S6E16 Review · 9:50pm Aug 20th, 2016

Time for MLP to shatter and confirm our headcanons in equal doses once more.

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Jun
11th
2016

Spice Up Your Life S6E12 Recap · 4:04pm Jun 11th, 2016

Pony is at its best when it does new and creative things. And its often as its worst when it falls onto predictable stock plots.

How meta this episode is.

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Sep
3rd
2016

Buckball Season S6E18 Review · 8:42pm Sep 3rd, 2016

Time to give one of the most worthless characters on the show something to do at last.

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Jun
18th
2016

Chapter review requested · 4:20am Jun 18th, 2016

Hey people, I've finally finished my rough draft of STANT chapter 6 (sexy time included), and I'd very much like someone to look over it before I put it up for all to critique.

If you're interested, PM me and I'll send you the link to the gDoc.

This is the first time I've ever written something like what's in this chapter, and I'm a little self-conscious... Ok I'm super self-conscious about this.:fluttershysad:

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Report Lyruil · 396 views · #update #critique #mature
Oct
10th
2016

Top Bolt Review S6E24 · 5:18pm Oct 10th, 2016

Time to wrap up the season (for me, anyway)

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Aug
13th
2016

28 Pranks Later S6E15 Review · 4:00pm Aug 13th, 2016

Remember Season 1 when Pinkie and Rainbow bond over their love of pranks? Well 5 seasons later, so did our new writer.

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Jan
1st
2017

2016 was so last year · 5:21pm Jan 1st, 2017

Well, hi.

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Report Casca · 743 views · #review #critique #lyfe #update
Mar
23rd
2016

THE CRITIQUE'S SECOND YEAR ANNIVERSARY · 8:19pm Mar 23rd, 2016

Jun
4th
2016

Flutter Brutter S6E11 Recap · 4:03pm Jun 4th, 2016

Fluttershy DOES have a family!

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May
28th
2016

Applejack's Day Off S6E10 Recap · 4:05pm May 28th, 2016

So nice of them to give a background pony a starring episode.

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Aug
25th
2018

Next Chapter Updates · 4:21am Aug 25th, 2018

I'm writing the next chapter as of now. Is still about 20 percent finished:twilightsheepish: and I hope I can post in in the next two weeks.

So while you wait:

Tell me your thoughts of what Love Degree has been so far. I would like to know your thoughts, opinions or emotions about it.

:heart:

Aug
27th
2016

Dungeons and Discord S6E17 Review · 4:06pm Aug 27th, 2016

Stayed up on my night shift sleep cycle to enjoy this one with a chat.

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Oct
13th
2018

Plenitude's Critique of Fallout: Equestria · 5:13pm Oct 13th, 2018

It's been forever since I even thought about this story, but a user linked me to an extensive critique he made about this story. If you got time, I HIGHLY recommend giving it a look. It breaks the story down piece by piece, informing us in a fair, objective critique about how each aspect of Fallout: Equestria fails.

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May
5th
2016

"In the Crystal Grove" Story Critique. · 3:50am May 5th, 2016

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This deconstructive critique thingy was done at the behest of Weatherbug. Be it through snow or sleet, rain or hail, the Meat delivers without fail.
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Dec
18th
2017

Feel free to criticize. · 10:18am Dec 18th, 2017

Today I must remind myself comments are for commenting. Good and bad. Long or short. Those that criticize and those that point out something ironic/amusing/WTF?!?. I have never shied away from any as long as they weren't hate filled, overly spammy, or so confusing that I had no idea what they were trying to say... It is the nature of putting whatever you create(Like a fan fiction) out there for people to see...

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