I laugh when people think I know what I'm doing.
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I enjoyed it, but there are quite a few errors that detract somewhat. You might want to see if you can get an editor, or possibly get a friend to proofread it.
Beyond that, I love it, and I'm looking forward to seeing what else you do with the story.
Well... I would have before I posted this, but none of my normal proofreaders were online at the time I uploaded this. I guess my impatience won over .
Sorry about that, I'll get onto it.
very good, when do you plan on writing the next chapter
New chapter... Hmm, probably once I finish the song I'm working on and a chapter to a different story.
With any luck, it should be sometime this weekend. However, Luck has never been on my side when writing, so my guess is good as yours.
Humm, really nice start, clean, and crisp. Nice work. this has the foundation needed to build a great story. Keep it up.
sooooooo ya ummmm is there goen to be an update
i have a hypothesis...: vinyl times octy attracts great writers.
i say this because the many (and i do mean MANY) different stories I've read about them are all good!
and this one is no exception.
keep up the great writing, I'm looking forward to reading more
Hmmm, the completed tag almost brought me to tears D:
Okay. I've done some experimenting, and I think I've found what works.
I doubt anyone will read it, but I'm writing the next chapter this weekend. (Sorry for the VERY, VERY, VERRRY long delay).
I can promise you that at least someone (me) is reading this and hopes for more! d(-_-)b
This is pretty awesome stuff.
Thanks! School's taking up alot of my time, but I'm making progress towards the next chapter.
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as i read this there is one chapter.
its ok.
Very nicely written there, I really like how Vinyl got lost in her memories...
Also, I would love to see another chapter.
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Yeah... Things were getting hectic back then and I sorta, well... Forgot. *Awkwardly scratches head*
Sorry.
Ehh, it was alright. I kinda felt like the TaviScratch came out of nowhere, but Ritz was cool~
You get three out of five moustaches