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This fic is under heavy construction- meaning some key plot points and even complete chapters will be removed or changed drastically. I recommend either downloading the story now if you enjoy it, or wait under corrections are made before you begin. Thanks!

Comedy tag applies only to early chapters

Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie have been together for quite a long time and are quite happy with where they are today. But it took a long time, many arguments, and lots of broken hearts to get it this way. Very fortunate and thankful, they decide to look back on the rollercoaster that is their close relationship.

FlutterPie fic. Don't like? Don't read.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 31 )

Usually I don't like shipping, especially this pair. This is a good read though.

190880

Thank you! Personally this is one of my favorite shippings and I haven't seen many fics about it, so I thought "why not?" :pinkiesmile:

Hmm, FlutterPie? Well I'm all for a good Fluttershy shipping so let's see where this goes.

It was a good read, definitely an interesting story. :eeyup:

However, near the end, it seemed that Pinkie was almost too oblivious to the gummi/fluttershy accident. She just went about her normal doings. I know she can be a bit... difficult :unsuresweetie: to understand, but the punchbowl shattering on her head, ripping out Fluttershy's hair, and punch-soaked floorboards seem like an addressable issue to elaborate on.

Other wise I enjoyed and would happily read more from you. :rainbowlaugh:

190965

Glad to know I've gotten your attention. :pinkiecrazy:

190987

Thanks, I was trying to go for the "Pinkie Pie didn't feel a thing" feeling, but just maaayybbee I went too far. :rainbowwild:

Not half bad, a spelling error here or there, but nothing to major. I would like to see more.

I already know somepony's gonna say something so...

1. Cheerilee is not a unicorn, and I know that. This is her father, who she is named after. (Remember Baby Cakes? Offspring can be different pony "races")
2. Same thing with Rainbow Blitz. My version is that RB had RD, realized she was a pegasus, and sadly had to give her to a family of pegasi in Cloudsdale. Yet another reason why she decided to wage war on the pegasi (:rainbowderp: Did I just reveal the next chapter? :trollestia:)
3. This is part one of two (possibly three) of Fluttershy's dream. There's gonna be a Pinkie Pie one too, just wait. :pinkiehappy:
4. This is before Mayor became... Well, mayor.

Hope this covers most of this installment. :twilightblush:

194533

Well, that cleared up most of my questions. Good on you. :twilightsmile:

Wow, this wasn't really the direction I expected the story to take. The sudden shift in tone and brick wall racism between the ponies is pretty jarring, unless it's just a dream that Fluttershy is kind of making up. I guess it just bugs me for several reasons I won't bother mentioning right now. But still not bad writing, no errors so far and I'll be seeing where this goes.

197379

It's a dream, don't worry. :pinkiesmile:The next one will hopefully be back in the present with the lovey-dovey Fluttershy and Pinkie. :twilightsmile:
I'll pull back the racism in the next chapter.

197774 Well I know it's a dream she's having but I'm just trying to figure out if it's like a flashback or something she's just sort of making up. Because if she's making it up that's fine but if it's a flashback it sort of bugs me.

197988
I'll put it this way- there's a small part in the final half of the dream that is real, but the rest she is making up as she goes.

Hope this clears up any problems you had. :raritywink:

198016 Ah yes, that makes everything better. Sorry for all the whiny comments :derpytongue2: But keep up the good work.

A cute ending. Looking forward to more:pinkiehappy:

Pinkie Pie kicked absolute ass!

201698

Well, she is Pinkie Pie. :pinkiecrazy:

FlutterPie.. it's so full of win but I almost feel sorry for Fluttershy here, her having to keep up with Pinkie seems just wrong.. :rainbowwild:

Looking forward to the next chapter:pinkiehappy:

This chapter was originally just a little add-on, but then I decided to elaborate on the idea and it blossomed into this short little chapter. Enjoy nonetheless~

287357

A lot of randomness and Pinkie Pie. :pinkiecrazy:

And at last, it is over. As the description suggests I'll be editing this beast (Plot holes everywhere, oh no) soon enough, but fear not! A semi-sequel to this will be coming out shortly, and I'll be sure to link all of you to it when the time comes. :pinkiesmile:

-Epic

Yay, stuff happened and a happy ending :D

Wait, a few chapters ago... Rainbow and Aj were talking and then Aj blushed does this mean we will has APPLEDASH :DDDDDD? (Huge appledash fan/pinkieshy fan)

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