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"We choose those we like; with those we love, we have no say in the matter."

The inevitable effect of time has hit Ponyville full-force, and with it the trials and tribulations of having to let friends go. Slowly the Mane 6 have drifted away from one another, focused solely on their ever-ascending careers, until only Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy remain. The experiance of letting go again and again has hardened Pinkie's emotions, but when they both meet on a quiet river and bring up the subject, will Fluttershy be able to keep her composure?

Proofread by the immaculate Garbo802

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Comments ( 13 )

I love this fic, you did a great job with it.

You'll need thousands upon thousands of buckets to keep these tears off the floor...

immaculate? Nice word choice.
Also, this was a very interesting story. The utter simplicity of it is refreshing when compared with most shipping. A lot of people could follow this example.

simply amazing :pinkiehappy:

Very simple, great attention to details, but not too much to be just telling the reader what it looks like, it makes the reader imagine as well and hear what the description is. It was beautiful, and I honestly almost cried when they were explaining what happened to their group. I loved this story. Keep writing like this and you will go far.

I love the story:pinkiesad2:
Anbody else have friend abandon them it sucks:fluttershysad:

Very, very cute, I loved it, really simple yet very meaningful, honestly hoping to see more:twilightsmile:

Too sad 2 cry. I luv it sooo much.

Very well written and sweet! This fic deserves more attention than it's getting. :pinkiesmile:

You just dropped a fresh batch of Feelios on me. Also, the feels nation bombed my concrete bunker of gaming. Y u do dis to meh?

No words. But I think I must post this:
Just too beautiful. :heart:

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This was such a sweet story. It was saddening that the others drifted away, but that's life. Seeing these two sharing this moment was nice.

I especially enjoyed it being from Pinkie's perspective. It feels as though, while she is still the fun-loving Pinkie Pie, she has matured. She knows to listen and observe, and that helped Fluttershy open up to her.

And the flower at the end was a nice touch.

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