Everything was fine, until Pinkie started hearing those voices in her head. She'll have to fight against them and, maybe, a very special somepony will help her
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As a huge Pinkieshy shipper, this amuses me. Please do continue
The story seems interesting so far, but the dialogue format makes it feel too much like a screenplay rather than a story. Please consider switching to "quoted dialogue" rather than a leading dash.
2798071 I plan to continue with the story, as I am a huge PinkieShy shipper too! I'll let you know when the next chapter is ready
2851954 Thanks! I'll consider your advice
I find listening to music REALLY BUCKING LOUD
drowns out the voices
...........
Oh, and story rocks
Aside from a few spelling errors, nice work. I like the story so far, but it did get slightly confusing about who was talking at certain places.
Is it just me or is that a sponge bob reference lol.
(Where's next chapter)
More plz?
Fluttershy's got a cru-ush! Fluttershy's got a cru-ush!