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Fluttershy, tired beyond belief after her amazing preformace lifting the water, has come to a little field where her animal friends are waiting with words of happiness and pride. But something else is waiting for her in the shadows, this one with different motives then to simply talk...

I couldn't help myself- I saw a blog post (can't remember where) where this guy who was reviewing the latest episode began to talking about SpitShy (or FlutterFire). I thought "Why not?" And that is what is here before your very eyes to hopefully enjoy. Expect more random shippings sometime in the near future, all you crazy shippers you.

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Comments ( 18 )

i enjoyed friend
wonderfully done
please accept my thumb as payment to whatever muse moved you to write this
lolz

Short, Sweet, and cute. I like it :twilightsmile:

FlutterFire? Count me in.

Yay, for once abgel isnt an asshole!

Great stroy! :scootangel:

Awesome, Fluttershy is my favorite pony. :yay:

Sorry, but this one seems rushed and forced, the two things you SHOULDN'T do when writing a fiction. It had it's moments, and potential, in the beginning yes, but towards the ending, all the way from where Spitfire stepped in, it fell more and more apart. I understand it since this is another one-shot quickship on the wall, but try to remember to write without haste next time, okay?

On the Diabetes Scale, I think I'd give this about a 7/10 :pinkiesmile:
Fairly good, but the end kinda throws off the flow a bit, ending so abruptly.

LET'S GET THE PARTY STARTED FOR FLUTTERSHY AND SPITFIRE!
Yesh I love it too. BRING IT ON >:O.:yay::trollestia::eeyup::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::pinkiesmile::ajsmug::scootangel::raritywink:

369990>>370040

Thanks for your input, I'll be sure to slow down and add a little more of an ending. :twilightsmile:

awww... cute flutterfire??? COuNT ME IN!!! (my reactions: :fluttercry: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiesad2: :twilightsmile: )

Woouuww:derpyderp2::derpyderp1::rainbowderp:
You make Rainbow Dash so sad.

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Poor Rainbow. :rainbowkiss:

Frogs, serously! that sound deseperated
PS: I LOVE IT

Finally! I have been looking all over for a FlutterFire story, and I wasn't disappointed :pinkiesad2:

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