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Luna, as much as she hated to admit it, was jealous.

Jealous of the fanfare her sister received, jealous of being thrust out of the spotlight when it came to Celestia and the Sun.

But as jealous as the small alicorn was, she never wanted this.

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I know that the indentation doesn't line up correctly, and I'm attempting to fix it.

As always critique is very helpful. :pinkiehappy:

wow... that was intense. I loved it.

Couple of typos, but otherwise very good!

A well deserved thumbs up.

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Thanks! :raritywink:

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I'll have to edit those today. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks. :twilightsmile:

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