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Alexia shouldn't be so fast in assuming things. She solved the gender ration issue, so they should be happy. So what if it's unconventional in human terms, they aren't human anyway.
Can't imagine what the absorbing of mana will do in the future though.
Edit:
Before I forget
Which fetish is this?
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was suppose to be ate, not are.
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2707622 Don't you know what a joke is?
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Don't care! I got exactly what I wanted, bravo!
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Hmm, hints of a quadarchy? The clop wasn't bad, it just wasn't the focus of the chapter, which is good in my book. Perhaps it's just my internal censors though, hard to tell. I honestly believe most of the ponies would be overjoyed at the marriage, especially when they find out that Alexia is the Alpha... It sounds like the Princess title is coming subconsciously even inside the herd, Loki mentioned it in passing if we recall correctly.
So much is happening! I hope everyone can keep it together.
Keep going! ;)
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I take back my statement from yesterday. They're all becoming royalty/alicorns now.
A second read-through also gave:
Not as bad as the last time, but still... could produce caused all four of the ponies' magic
Should really be that we instead.
It's* (not even part of the story)
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Okay okay, you caught me. Everyone is becoming alicorn klingon cylon hybrids so they can enslave the Mions to destroy the Death Star with Babylon 5's longcat cannon.
except for Alexia, she's really a dalek autobot.
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*Eh emm* (Throat clearing doesn't have a proper spelling. Screw it.)
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this story is coming along wondrously, I honestly hope that the next chapter comes soon and I hope Tune gets her mana situated nicely before it's too late
I hope this doesn't backfire though, because I have a feeling it will due to how obsessed they are about Alexia especially with the "herd mentality" they seem to insist that's good for them.
Nice spin on the whole "herd" part of the story though, I feel like part of it, if not most of it, is inspired by Xenophilia there. I wonder how you'll make the world react to this development.
Woah. Uh. I, uh. Don't know what to say here. Honestly. I'm flabbergasted. Just, my mind can not comprehend the events that had unfolded before me- oh, wait, there it goes.
This... Herd business is a bit distasteful to me. As much as I enjoy knowing that they are truly happy now with each other, I just can't... seem to accept it. :( I don't know why. But, it's just me, I think. I'm not really used to themes like the ones presented in this chapter. It's definitely a radical change from what I have come to expect from Fanfiction, and it took me far from my comfort zone.
Or maybe I'm just overly emotional right now due to how tired I am. XD
To tell you the truth, this was a quite unique experience for me, lack of sleep or not. I can't help but feel a twang of jealousy towards their happiness. Odd, considering I never really "feel" anything for fictional characters.
I'm actually feeling a bit of sorrow since I'm nearing the end of the book. I... Sort of wish it would go on longer. But, hey, I have a good amount of chapters left, plus a sequel.
So, onto the next chapter... Which I have a bad feeling is going to introduce something super dark to balance out this chapter.
Ahh, but before that... I need Bed. Now. Before I start getting philosophical. And noooooobody wants that.
Great story, great chapter, keep up the awesome work.
3222081 I like the herd mentality. It makes more sense than greedy monogamy.
3262768 The other chapters didn't have clop. What happened with the dildo and the sex with Conrad wasn't meant to be sexual in anyway. It was a plot development
The mane thing was a beautiful piece of world-building.
3276406 It's only really greedy when it starts hurting others or oneself, but in the case of this dynamic, such actions could become so.
I thought there was no difference?
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Really?
3863506 HA!!!!!!!!! That is called AUTHOR FAIL.
aww sweet
(Snickering) focus on plot (snicker
Okay, i'm good.
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O, heck with it!
lovely
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What a smart thing to do!
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WAIT. I REMEMBER YOU NOW. You fucking post puns in your comments all the time! I ran across them in another story and left quite a few additions throughout the chapters.
I wish the author would stop going back and forth from calling Crimson that name or Anderson. Just call her Crimson.
I wish the narrator called the characters one name instead of two. Would make memorizing everyone's names easier.
At least so far only Alexia Tune and Anderson/Crimson have this problem so far.
Look forward to seeing the ranch ponies reaction to the solution to the growing problem of the colts being outnumber 3 to 1.
And the humans reactions to the ponies sex lives. Polygamy and not Monogamy? Wonder how humans who are unaware of the gender imbalance would react.