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Pretty nice update. I'm not sure whether or not to be happy about Michael's resistance to the "herd mentality" on one hand it was pretty good to see that he's not really ready to jump on the board and show Alex about the possibility that he'll take the chance to go back to being human but on the other hand he really needs to be with the main characters and hopefully become one himself because he really needs the friends right now.
Also, I didn't know that the other characters were still with Thompson and I thought they were back at the ranch by now, or am I still mistaken about the setting in this chapter? But I'm assuming since they're all on the chopper by the end of the chapter they're going back to the Ranch now right? I think it's high time the heroes try to follow that plan I said earlier and try to gain their independence so when they do get rid of the true cause of the planets end. they'll be free.
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Stated the location in the second sentence.
Aw, so not a Pegasus. Oh will, the air squadron will have to wait then. ;)
Something that occurred to me is that there should be more ambient magic now, especially with the concentration of ponies at the Ranch. I don't think it's enough to be self-sustaining yet, but who knows? Perhaps Alexia can start making more crystals?
I wonder how long it will take for Alexia to show, she's what, a month along now? We sincerely hope the general won't take advantage of this... development...
Keep going! ;)
Nice.
great story, update soon!
im wondering if we will see discord at anypoint soon, or any of the other princesses
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Sorry, but I forgot where Fort Smith was when I read it.
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Not a problem, i try to use real world locations when i can so you typically find that stuff on Google maps. As for my accuracy on what the buildings are...
Hmm, hmm, hmm, Loki and Conrad are becoming more accepting of each other. I wonder if their herd instincts will also apply to mates~?
NEED MOAR!!! Is to Super-Awesomazing!
That and the fact she had morning sickness earlier, PREGGERS
I feel for you Mike. It's one thing to lose your humanity. It's a whole other ball park to lose your gender.
...Huh. That's all I really have for this chapter. Odd.
Oh, well, onto the next one.
3189509 sudden craving for ice cream agrees in that, I'm just waiting for it.
I had a hunch for a few chapters that Tune is pregnant, and with the addition that she had not had a period yet and her morning sickness plus her cravings I am sure that she is foaling.
Tune and Conny gonna have a foal!
sweet
Can't resist... BITE MY SHINY METAL ASS!
3272697 Huh... I figured she was just in heat.
Quite a few people are complaining about the fact that ponies are just so much better than humans in this story. While I admit that my gut reaction to this is also negative, since it's a common trope that exists in many stories that it just really shouldn't, upon consideration this really should not be my reaction to this story. The premise of this story is that humans all over the world are (I hesitate to call it balefully) polymorphed into a better race in order to defeat these mind-controlling aliens. We don't complain when the protagonists of a story are vampires (I refer you to Luminosity - the reason I am glad the Twilight books exist), or when the main character realises that they are one of the few members of a race of humans who can use magic (Harry Potter, anyone?), so why would we complain that the ponies in this story are superior to humans when the whole point of ponies in this story is to be superior?
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Kinda sad that it's not a Heat cycle. Butt it explains/reinforces the fact that Alexia's preggers.
You know what? It's fortune she is pregnant because then they won't be able to send her on missions!
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"Mister Anderson."
Is that Mister Smith?
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I mean, equines are quite sturdy compared to humans due to their anatomical makeup so a pregnant mare would probably be fine doing hard labor for over half of the pregnancy, and she can stay physically active pretty much all through it up til the final weeks. Then there's the fact their carrying term is like, what, eleven or so months rather than humanities' 9 month average?
My fave is Caramel Chocolate Chunk.