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I have two questions if you're willing to answer them. I don't think either will give spoilers.
First: Other than Twilight and Discord, does anyone else on Equis know about the events happening on Earth? I don't think it matters right now if ever, I'm just curious.
Second: When is this all happening in relation to the show? In an earlier chapter Discord apparently was going to meet with Fluttershy, however; Twilights fears in this chapter seem to indicate that several decades have passed and her friends are either elderly or dead. Or maybe I'm just reading into it. I hope Tune and her Herd are at least happy at the end even if they can't stay together forever.
Also, this is a great story, but you might need another editor, I've seen several places where you've switched your/you're, there/their and others.
"I was planning on leaving the last bit out for the next chapter, but I decided it was best for you guys' heart conditions to add it in anyway." Thank you, thank you so very very very much! You are too kind! I mean, there is a line you can walk, between using cliffhangers to have a suspenseful audience, or to just completely tease them with "I know what happens next and you don't", but I personally think that you are a saint for letting us know that Alex and Conrad survive. You are a true gentleman and are totally awesome!
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1: only the Royal Sisters have been told, but Twilight would not withhold the information from anyone who asks.
2: The story is set six years after episode 1, with the tome being published a few months before the prologue. That's why the book said it had all of the up to date spell formula as of 5 RoL. (Return of Luna) I know it was only mentioned once in that single chapter, but at least i can say it was always there.
As for why Twilight is lamenting on the age factor, it is because she's trying to cope with the future loss now, or is at least aware of it. (none of these reasons are set in stone, but is the general mood.)
As for the editing, I almost do that solo.
Wait, what? The Director's a civilian?
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM what will alex represent now she is a alicorn like the sun and the moon with celesita and luna .....................got nothing?????
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The CIA and FBI are considered civilian agencies.
Yeah, I was expecting that last bit. I am glad that bowler didn't incur a full mutiny (or so we believe). Still, seeing as we're only presented with Conrad's pov, we're wondering how they achieved safe passage to the hospital.
Keep going! ;)
Agh.
Please, just kill bowler in the most painful way you can imagine. Throw him into a bottomless pit filled with rusty, dull nails and then dump truckloads of salted lemon juice as soon as his screams start to die down.
2783901 Last I checked her cutie mark was a symbol for life and seeing as she literally have kept her entire species alive that's not an improbable concept. Speculation of course.
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question: not sure if i missed it somewhere in the chapter, who's Qubert? a friend? or relative?
also, how immortal is Tune, completely or just ageless?
look forward to seeing next chapter and all the interactions with friends and family (and also the worship that is sure to happen from the other ponies... that will be very awkward when walking down the road or things like that)
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Qubert was Alexia/Jame's friend in the beginning.
Not saying anything on agelessness/iimmortality
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fixed. I could always use an editor *hint hint wink wink*
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Yeah, I felt it was sort of needed to add the chapter epilogue. (Its not the story epilogue.)
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Those would work as well, so long as the initial blast isn't the lethal part. This man deserves to die slowly.
2785896 But that would mean I had to work for once. I never work. I'm just here to make funny theories and read stuff. Plus the most I'd be able to find is poor sentence structure and wrong word choices.
I'm glad that I was wrong about wanting to wait a month when it happens, but I am sure that the Ranch Arc coming to a close and I can't wait to see the reaction of his friend Q when they return as well as Crimsons and Alexia's parents. Actually I would like to know about the other ponies fate whenever you decide to do a time skip a week or so when everyone leaves the Ranch, and I'm actually surprised that they managed to get away from not talking about it. I'm also surprised that they hardly said anything about everyone who is a pony is formerly human, it was only lightly touched upon in a blink-and-you-missed-it subject.
Speaking of subjects, I wonder how bad Alexia will react to finding out that she'll live forever if the other ponies who worship her bring this up. Also I was wondering if there have been any other pony that has been working on a way to change back to normal... oh wait, they don't have their Tomes don't they? But surely there has to be at least one or two people who was just as clever as Alexia working on their own way to change back to normal, especially with the comment about they can't get everyone.
Once again... Your writing...
*Slowly kneels*
*Lowers down*
*Begins to worship* O.O
The part with the tranquilization of Thompson was EXTREMELY tense, amazing, and tortured my mind with what happened to him. I'd also like to say that you definitely develop your characters well; I've grown attached to Thompson, and HATE Bowler
2806856 And then the author turns into an alicorn.
I knew bowler was going to be a problem. I hope he dies a slow, painful death.
Man, the president isn't going to be pleased to find out that Bowler nearly destroyed any and all relations with ponies with the forever cliche excuse 'muh cuntry!'
How long after the events of the show is this set anyways? I noticed that Twilight thought about her friends like they were already gone
(WARNING! This video is adult swim)
Two of them?
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THIS IS FUCKING WHY HUMANITY IS DYING!!!!!!!
Look forward to seeing the challenges the equines will face integration into human society.
Probably dont care anymore but typo/
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