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I hope the next chapter comes out soon, while this is not a cliffhanger per se, it still leaves me hungering for more
MORE!
great chapter, update soon! plz!
can't wait to see the reaction of people to the ponies when the secret is revealed...(assuming you do a tv thing like you did at the beginning of this chapter)
for a second there during the mana flare i thought that Alexia was becoming an alicorn... on a side note, will she become an alicorn near the end to rule over the ponies on earth?
that is all for now, have some love
Really really really expected Tune to become an Alicorn there
2702629 2702890 I've been calling for Alicorn Princess Alexia Tune since chapter 13 or so, partly expected the flare to do it before Twilight said it's the same she had as a child. Now I'm just waiting for her to accept the rule and then she's a princess.
On an unrelated note, Alexia won't be happy when she's the representative who's holding a press conference with the President.
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Hell, who knows... maybe she won't be an alicorn? Maybe the foals will both be.
2703212 Sparkle is showing some hesitation towards certain things she heard Alexi's followers do, so who knows. But if it does I'll be the first one to say I called it. But alicorn foals? Doubt that'd happen, as far as we know alicorns are made not born.
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Hey, Luna and Celestia are called sisters, who knows if they are being literal or figurative? Honestly, I kind of have a feeling of one of the foals doing something in the womb that magically injures Tune, or just does something to seriously turn her world to hell for a few chapters. It seems like something this author would do.
As soon as Twi mentioned keeping their mana levels in check, my first thought was of Tune saying out loud. "Oh, I think one of them is kicking! . . . Wait, that's not a kick." And then Tune explodes, from the womb outwards.
2703247 You say the foals would injure Tune, but I was thinking the opposite. She has twins now, but I really don't expect two live foals to be born. At least one of them will probably die in some horrible fashion, by my expectations. Like she gets shot, and the bullet randomly hits one of the foals and kills it.
Alien vibes there.
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Eh, I guess your idea would be more likely, considering her line of work. And if would make for a great "You killed my foal. Enjoy extinction." moment. (After the initial shock/grief/etc.)
2703271 Sadly, my idea would also cause the most emotional backlash. Not just for Lexi but for the entire group, who have been expecting twins all along. Also, if that happened we could probably dub it Tune's Lesson Zero.
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But then, if one died and the other was born an alicorn? Hell, I'll let everyone's imaginations run wild with the potential symbolism.
2703306 Or, if we humor the possibility that at the time (because we don't know) Tune have one unicorn and one pegasus fetus. Because they both have the same condition as Lexi now have (many body/carbuncle thing) before the birth they grow together as one. So she's left with a lone foal that have both horn and wings.
Then they wouldn't even have to die, since they'd be fairly similar genetically anyway so it could happen.
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I suppose that could work, while it may be rather devastating for Conrad/Tune/Loki/Crimson.
On a semi-unrelated note: Why do I have the feeling that Law Abiding Pony is about to look at his notifications and just say 'da fuq?'
2703333 Notification spam is the best spam, really.
We've gone over everything that can/might/will go wrong, but let's not forget the obvious but unlikely 'everything goes as expected' and neither gets any serious injury.
Even more unrelated, why haven't Twi asked Discord how he got Tune to Equestria during the party?
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But if everything goes as expected, where's the fun in the story? I was starting to lose interest in this story, until the government picked them up. The unexpected is what maintains the suspense, making stories like this be the ones that are consistently enjoyable to read.
I for one would rather read about someone hanging from a rope over a cliff, fearing for his life; as opposed to reading about a guy who just fell off a cliff. If he's hanging by the rope, you don't know what's going to happen. He might be able to climb back up, he might get half way there, the rope my snap right as he can almost reach the top, he might fall from the rope to simply grab the cliff face.
That element of unexpectations is what fuels a good story. (Yeah, I know that's not a real word. Buck off.)
But then, Discord is doing this all to maintain life so that life can maintain a chaotic change. What would be more of a change than simply throwing random at the planet and seeing what sticks? (Such as simply snapping his fingers and getting rid of the source of the Mions, while maintaining the illusion that it was Mankind's doing.)
Another semi-unrelated: Is Discord going to stop making more ponies? Will there be any humans left by the end of it all? Perhaps once the existence of them is made public, Discord steps it up a few hundred notches and starts doing it by city. But then, that would leave no regular humans or the Mions to convert, leaving only one option...
For both sides to do their best to simply wipe the other side out. Which is kind of what was happening during Discord's glimpse into the 'possible' future.
In fact, for all we know, the cloud making thing in the ocean followed Discord's magic there. Perhaps his magic acted like a flare for the thing to follow to find an inhabited world?
That would be a slightly... chaotic plot twist, no?
Holy hell I got really turned around while typing that. I don't even know where my original train of thought was going. I don't even know if the train was even on any tracks.
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Well from what I remember the meteor was already on its way before Discord introduced the first pony into the world, so I don't think that he led them there in the first place. Though he might at large have increased their advancement when they know there's ponies on the planet who can resist the control they put into the humans. And I also vaguely remember him not wanting mankind dead and extinct, or was that just that the planet would be lifeless? Either way I don't think that'd happen anytime soon.
The Kalderians (or whatever) have already proven they don't agree with the ponies and try their hardest to convert every single human so they can do something with them. Still haven't got a clear idea of that but it's likely nothing good. Problems are everywhere though.
Which is why it can be plausible.
If they have just suffered a loss of hundreds of ponies/humans/civilians and everyone is down and depressed the birth of a few foals could be played as an ice breaker to get people in contact with the world again, a new hope if you will. There can be complications along the way, sure. But it's entirely possible to use the pregnancy in that way too, even if it's not entirely as unexpected.
Or, they both survive until birth but one of them gets fatally injured sometime during their early life. It might be less likely, but given the story already span several months they might just survive that long.
Unrelated again,
I use a wall, but that's how I get ideas for anything. Throw it at a wall and see what sticks.
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Looks at notifications... Da faq?
theory-crafting so much heartache for the future? Allow me to express my thoughts when everyone starting raging about X and Y. 25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lzvs1bI8Ft1qkfq9yo1_500.png
Your comment:
made me think of Losing interest
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You... have no idea how had I am laughing right now...
2703501 I don't know how that happened.
Also, I reserve my right to forcefully explode if everything we said is wrong.
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If this here "Law Abiding Pony" refuses to ABIDE THE LAWS OF COMMON SENSE, and therefore try and make his readers (You and I, derr) enjoy the story as much as he can manage... Then that would go against the expected. Which, as previously stated, would make me enjoy the story even more. But then he- ... But I- ... Brbparadox.
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Assuming of course that Law Abiding Pony follow the rules of common sense. If he follow the rules of insanity it could very well be so that he want us to hate his story, and by that make all these horrible and unexpected things happen. Which backfired since we enjoy it more.
The only thing that makes sense is if the unexpected happens when we expected that he will do the unexpected so we assume he does the expected. Wait... I'm lost.
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I do believe that between the two of us, we have just shattered all reason and logic in the name of ponies.
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*nods head in approval* I agree. Logic never had a strong ground here in the first place.
“American royalty is a ludicrous idea. If we were in England this kind of thing would likely get me arrested for trying to oust the Queen.” -- Tune
I can safely say that England is not like this XD Many people here hate the queen, and they're fine with it. She's more of a figurehead, and has no real power. The only laws protecting the royal family's power are archaic laws which send you to Australia. And which are unlikely to be enforced.
People always think that we love 'our' queen, but that just is not the case :P
Thanks for another amazing chapter, this is my favorite fanfic by far. Amazingly well written, I almost (or maybe I fully) enjoy it as much as a great official episode. I can only hope that it lasts for a long time!
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So do we pronounce this as a mission accomplished?
Or do we continue to torment this poor author with large amounts of notifications due to our back and forth ramblings about potential concepts that he has either already decided on whether or not to do?
2703626 We have the alternative to do like the guy above you did, get to the point. Although since I find that idea ludicrous, I'd say we can't get much further until he gives us more story to devour.
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I propose a compromise!
I move that we continue to flood the inbox of the author, as an attempt to make him write faster, so that we may get to the point on new materials!
2703644 Brilliant. Yet I can't feel that would somehow be counterproductive if we constantly distract the author from writing.
Just to clarify though, what is the point we're trying to make?
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2703669 Final proposition is delay the bugging of author operation until we have a point decided.
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You guys keep this up and I'll rename this chapter notification spam.
Don't think that i won't!
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I support both of this motions.
2703698 To be fair it was a serious discussion until halfway through.
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! Please tell me they're going to have a big, loving orgy! I don't think I've ever read a single clop scene that had something larger than a threesome in a romantic light before. It'd be super satisfying to see them all show each other "physical love" after all of this character and relationship building.
While I thought everyone would figure out the clouds and the cults by now, I was disappointed that they WANT evidence to prove this thing. But I am glad that the transformed humans are finally getting out of this Ranch and happening in a way that I thought would happen: Alexia signing with the president to reestablished their renewed-American identities, I just hope that the cult or the general won't use this time to attack them and make them look bad.
I also agree with Alex's position to be leader and JUST THAT, the ponies are acting too strangely and treating her weirdly. She's just a normal person who just takes change in stride. Trying to make someone into a God is freaking crazy, there doesn't seem to be not many people ponies trying to stop that, and if they were I bet they're pretty small or quiet.
Princess Alexia. Has a nice ring to it. It seems she is following twilight's path quite well so far, in her own way.
We think it unlikely that the marriage well be able to be kept so quiet, but it would certainly be a momentous occasion, as it would effectively set precedent over such things. I certainly pity those stuck without mates, how does one relieve that tension as a mare? My head nearly exploded on that point, preceded only shortly by an anime-style nose bleed (or, at least we think this is the proper reaction, it is quite difficult to understand these things)...
I think Alexia is taking the princess thing a little too seriously, it's not like she would truly have any more responsibilities than she already routinely participates in (for the moment at least). Still, there's the matter of her future ascension, something Twilight has been quite keen to keep hidden (trollestia's student after all! ;p )
Keep going! :)
I see what you did there. I loved the Austin Powers movies!
favorite chapter so far! i love the traditions you made for the ponies to show their relationships, esp the earth pony one.
Damn. This chapter jumped moods and topics more times than a frog has to to get from point A to point B.
Marriage, Herds, Polygamy, Mana Flares, Ponies who think James is some sort of god, Michael getting his cutie mark, the White House announcement...
Good lord, I had to focus intensely to keep myself on track. That was an awful lot of information to take in all at once, but it's no big deal...
Shoot, I think I need to just go to the next chapter. My thoughts wouldn't be able to do a single bit of justice to the events in this chapter. No, no, I'll leave this chapter be. No, not of of laziness, but because I don't think anything I say would matter. Not here.
So, onto the next one.
So when alex becomes an alicorn will the same thing that happened to twilight happen to alex, song included.
nice
Okay I'm done, as much as I want to finish this story I can't.
It's a good read but just not for me; I can't relate to the main character and her ability to accept the sex change like she did (the sex scene post cutiemark made me cringe and nearly drop the story) but the thing that pushed me over the edge was the polygamous relationship herd thing.
I know they are ponies but no sentient creature should have to put up with that, biology be damed! Conrad will always love Alex more than the other two, (and should the unthinkable happen and he does the love one of the other two more) I know he cares for them more than just so that they don't die out as a species but I can't get over that fact.
I really wanted to see this story through but these elements made reading... mind-numbing
Edit: kind of glad I stopped here; I read the next chapters title and the clop warning lol
Why did no one mention Loki turning into a potted pot plant? That and the "well time to go!" Made me giggle in the middle of a phone call.
(Snickering) That's funny! I just imagined Pinkie Pie coming from nowhere and saying something like, "I know! Let's have a PARTY!!!!!!!!"
Just for that, when I'm finished reading this imma fav and like.
So I'm re-reading this because the sequel's finished, and then –
– ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) #420blazeitfagit
Seriously though, I don't know how I missed this. I couldn't stop laughing for at least ten minutes.
Just started reading this story last weekend and it's been a good read so far. A bit wordy in some areas where the subject drags on, but aside from a few complaints I rather enjoy it. I wonder if the ponies will eventually get their own land. I can aging how that would be...
100 years later
"You know son, this land wasn't always like this, long ago Equinopolis was a dry uninhabitable wasteland where few were able to survive. But thanks to pegasus and earth pony magic the land was transformed and made livable, and the land was gifted to us for their service and the name was changed to what you know now."
"Wow dad, that's pretty cool... but uh, what was it called before all that?"
"Utah."
I've just realised I haven't liked or favourited this yet... Time to fix that.
i believe you mean Progeny.