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Whot can I sey abaut this chapter
IT WOS AWESOM
got to say i love this story
keep up the good work
SO AWESOME!!!!!!
that was so good! GIVE ME MORE!
will any ponies from equestria eg Twilicorn () come to earth via Discord? also, i'm wondering how people are going to react to ponies, will be funny
Welp, evil government man is going to kill Alexia's twins by accident in three...two...
Another great chapter, I'm also impressed with your update speed, hope your not burning yourself out though.
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Thanks
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I don’t plan on physically bringing anyone from Equestria to Earth, but I’ll have to see how the story pans out. Even if I do bring anyone it won’t be any time soon.
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I'm not pushing myself to make the chapters, although i will have to slow down for now so i can get some RL stuff done this weekend.
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Fixed them. Thanks for the catch.
This is pretty awesome there's only one dark cloud in the horizon, but everything is looking up for the heroes. I just can't believe the main character got pregnant in the end. I bet that's going to put a damper on those four years of service. Actually I'm hoping that the deal will be signed with the president there as a witness or a true signing that will start their long struggle for independence and equality.
When Thompson started to give out his opinions to free the transformed humans I thought of these themes:
Beginning:
Thompson's objection:
And a little something I just thought of when he got the other two to agree with him:
I just hope that the plan will not do something terrible that will get the babies or our main protagonist killed during this guy's stunt to make Alex look bad.
Another thing that I like about this chapter is that Twilight is smart enough to stop the ponies but not something to dangerous that will give them control over the transformed humans.
this chapter gets all of my YES, WIN and several internets!!!
and i knew it! alex was pergnant!!
Waaait a minute
Alexia = Magic
Conrad = Loyalty
Loki = Laughter
Crimson = ...Kindness?
O.O
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For a moment, I forgot Discord was a character in this story. I guess his lack of sense making is to be predicted by this point. Wait, doesn't he do the things he does for the sake of randomness and chaos? What happens if we expect his randomness to be chaotic? Would he fall into normalcy, or implode from a paradox? denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw4763_large.jpg
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I hope that comment was prophetic. I would prefer to write for a living.
it's just so beautiful man... *sniffle*
OMG THE FEELS
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Who says that males can't get pregnant if they change species and gender they can LOL
When they said "We fight as one" I automatically thought of this song and video.
MOTHERFUCKER
*Jaw Drop*
Unlike the last chapter, this one is PELTING me with surprises! I mean, what should I talk about first? There's just so much, it's insane!
Well, I guess I'll start with the newest member of our team, Michael Anderson. Or, Crimson now, that... He too has turned into a... mare, thus completing the 3:1 ratio (which I will get to) of the main group. And I have to say, he wasn't too creative with that name. Thank goodness it's just him who did that. I mean, imagine if the others did that. James's name would be Azure, by the way I always forget to mention this but his description reminds me a LOT of Vinyl Scratch. Loki's name would be Pink. Conrad would be Steel.
Now, onto the biggest issue here. WHAT IS THE GOVERNMENT DOING? Bowler, man, come on, you can't be THAT incompetent. Hell, everyone in that meeting, besides Thompson, is a LEGIT moron. They apparently have forgotten the ponies were once people, and thanks to asses like Colonel Bowler, find them to be "Tools." Even with this sudden plan of taking down The Ranch and "freeing" the ponies, and I'm using "freeing" very loosely here too, is saturated with the intents of personal gain. Also known as them getting the elites of the ponies for four years.
This won't work! They barely made it out of the FIRST mission with their sanity intact! And their expecting them to do this for Four Years? Conrad might be able to do it, but the other three wouldn't!
Especially now that... Oh no... James is pregnant. With twins no less. Yeah, didn't see that one coming. Great job covering it up with James assuming that they had the same functions as Ponies, by the way, you actually had me fooled up til' here.
But seriously... What are they going to do? James can't fight while pregnant, and after birth, who'll look after the foals? Not the Humans. Hell no. They've done enough damage, I don't need to see her kids being experimented on.
Everything was getting so much better, but now shit's once more hitting the fan. I blame James for being able to start a revolution solely by his good looks. :T Oh, and of course, Yknow, the charisma, and leader like figure to him... That too.
Okay, so, did I miss anything? New pony, government being a butt, preggers James, "freedom"... I think I just about got it all.
That's that then. Next chapter, I suppose. :)
excellent
3220807 About Alexia, how was it a surprise? There were all the symptoms over the course of the last few chapters, not to mention the HUGE hint-giveaway from discord. Betcha his little gift made it twins because well, kids are chaos, two kids, double chaos.
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I know this chapter is months old, and the story is in fact finished... but I can't NOT comment here.
That attitude shown in the meeting with the Colonel has not reared it's ugly head in government in a thousand years here on earth. It went out with the last functioning noble classes. ( well, it still existed a little in racism... But that died soon after the civil war.)
In any modern military, all living combatants are treated as well as possible. Because the people holding the strings realize that they are giving the keys to the kingdom to these soldiers. Namely training and guns. If you want a perfect non-human example, just look at the military working dog. This is a non-human, non-sapient being working with humans in the armed forces. But they are treated just as well as the human soldiers. Because well trained, happy dogs are LOYAL and will go through fire for their handlers. And any commanding officer who even hinted at considering them as mere tools would be booted out of his/her commission in a heartbeat.
My point is that none of these morons would survive in ANY military in the last thousand years. I get that you need certain things to happen, but there are plenty of ways to accomplish these things and maintain a believable scenario. Things like xenophobia, fear of magic, honest fear for the still human population in case the ponification is somehow contagious, or even concern for the ponies themselves which is miscommunicated or poorly communicated and paints the military as the villain.
They seem to like this plan, but i...... kinda don't it would also give the baddies access to that tech, thus making Alexia -or ANY unicorn for that matter- useless in future missions.
Aaaaah... never mind.
Profound!
pregnant, i knew it since she said she was craving sweet stuff while eating icecream when michael was still transforming
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I was also catching onto the same trend. I really think these guys are Earth's equivalent of the elements of harmony. We just need two more to finish the set.
I like how they referred to Loki in the same manner as the Mane Six did with Pinkie Pie.
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I figured it out WAAAAAAAAAAAY earlier than that. Back when she started having morning sickness, general fatigue, and the fact that she started to smell sweeter to Conrad
it's called "Courteous Magocracy". to paraphrase from D&DTools...
... It's been longer than two weeks though? Or is this a figure of speech?
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Okay, but that ending oh my god it's so sappy I fuckin love it ; ~ ;
To quote Moses in The Ten Commandments,
(Have I mentioned that this is a Good Story?)
It's catchy, self-explanatory, and easy to remember. Motion carrises!
It should be noted that there is a whole language of flowers and their colors that mean different things. For example...