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Hmm, that's a small disappointment, I hadn't expected only one pony in so many States, but the missing population would make sense, smaller sample size and all.
Still, Loki at least appears more accepting of her position, she wasn't being overtly depressed about lacking outward humanity.
It's good that most people are being very accepting so far, we think we should find some wood to knock on for that statement...
Perhaps they have been able to modify the car, but their uncomfortable position riding as a human posture wasn't really mentioned this time.
Keep going! ;)
Looks like Loki is right and she does need a bigger radar than this, but she still needs to put on a light show for everyone. I wonder how that party is going to turn out for everyone, I hope most people will keep the transformed ponies safe from the ones that will want to harm them. Especially Conrad's enemies.
And so, James became a full mare, and has accepted it as himself. ...Man, I feel sorry for him. He's missing out on all the perks of being a dude. :P Oh well. I guess that, even though I prayed, and hoped that it wouldn't come to this, I can still call him James. And him. Because I can. Plus... Gah, I don't know why, but I don't like Conrad and James being together. It feels... Wrong to me. Also, he seems pretty confident in his abilities. To the point where I feel he's getting a bit cocky. I'm expecting a horrible screw up in some later chapter. And he's getting to be full of himself, thinking that they as ponies are some kind of gift to the human race.
Speaking of the humans, they seem to be taking the presence of ponies, especially magical ones, pretty well. That STILL baffles me. What, have these people just seen so much weird shit, it doesn't even effect them? Do they still think they're androids? What's the deal? It said they weren't on the news or Internet much. I would expect a bit more shock. At least Paul had the decency to put a hand over his mouth in surprise. You know what Paul? You're my new favorite character. Congratulations.
But, human behavior oddities aside, now we have a second party! Or, third maybe, if the Fair counted. *Shrug* Good to see a Unicorn is using their almighty powers to become a set of strobe lights. That's what I would have done. Or maybe have the booze dance, a la Beauty & The Beast.
And in the meantime, we have Google Maps for Ponies. Awesome. I wonder who that stray one is? Poor fella. Hope they make it to the rave. Or at least survive the baddies. Man, I wonder if any of those syndicates are prowling right now for ponies. I'll bet Conrad's dad is going to have a bit of a market for that going on...
Speaking of baddies, looks like we have our first Named Mions, which maybe means they'll be trouble later for the heroes. Interesting system they have going though. Reminds me a little bit of the Collectors from Mass Effect 2, but, that's just me. Also, I see how they infect others now... Little flaps in the arms that poop out tendrils. Lovely. Or, maybe the one who infects is chosen by the Herald, and that's why Sahbita or whatever his name was had a bit of an ego problem.
Interesting chapters so far. I think I see a bit of growth into likable characters going on here, though again, James ego is getting a bit inflated, as well as his cockiness with his magic... Yeah, at the moment it's James I'm having the hardest time with. I think I moved past Loki, for now.
Next chapter.
sory Law Abiding Pony but i'm out of here, this is a pretty good story.
But its dont have that "ompf" for me to read any more than to this chapter.
( + it still bugging me you transformed the guy to a unicorn mare, and how
heshe dealing with it. )PS. I may come back and read the rest of the story on a later date.
Awwww! Discord has a fan!
Okay, this was a lot better. Possibly because we've moved past the really awkward situation where Alex was mind-screwing herself, and definitely because Loki hasn't had an opportunity to be a cow.
Also - Oh, great. Invasion of the Body Snatchers. Fun times ahead for all!
Yeah. No need to watch out for evil, mind-altering magic when you _do all the work for it_.
I'mma query that. The soul, as an unknown entity, is entirely unquantifiable here, so its inclusion in that statement is irrelevent, at best.
The mind... well, with the attraction to men, and the apparent favouring of emotional reasoning over rational, it's arguable that the simple fact of having female hormones flowing through the brain instead of male hormones has affected your mind. And please, let's not forget the whole issue you've just very forcibly overcome. I'm fairly certain that wouldn't have been a problem if your mind remained the same. So... yeah, you're spouting manure there.
Also, I do query the reasoning behind giving her an ankh as a cutie mark. As I recall, it is a symbol of rebirth - so her special talent lies in bringing the new from the old?
Well, you told him you needed it because you were ill and weren't sure if it was contagious. Strictly speaking, the only thing you lied about was the doctor's recommendation, and the name of the disease. Metamorphosing into a pony is certainly no man-flu, and if it were contagious, isolating yourself was the best thing you could have done (except for running all over town, going to various shops).
Really, the only thing he has to complain about is that you let two other people stay there without telling him (oh, and perhaps not speaking to him for weeks), but the seven thousand dollars in rent should more than cover any debt you owe.
Overly manly man
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Dial M for Manly
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WOB like WOW but mare Badass
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Oh god, I'm glad that I wasn't the only one thinking of that scene!
:)
Hahah XD I read this chapter and saw 'her' sitting alone up there and i just think 'i get this feeling that something's going to happen while she's alone' XD
Im going to keep reading because im interested in the story but this did feel like self-corrective rape to me.
Oh, it is an ankh? I had assumed it represented being cummed inside of
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6128248 omg im crying at how funney that was
And so dies James Tune, killed by the invading intelligence, and my interest in the story, by the stupidity of Alexia. Gonna leave it here.
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I know I'm jumping on a really old comment here, but I had a quick look at what the ankh meant to the Egyptians and I see two possibilities. First is roughly what you said, that it represents her new life. Second option is that it represents conception, and that we're looking at the first pregnant pony on Earth.
Excellent, we’ll be inside momentarily. *rams through the wall*
I... really can't help but feel like Alexia did conversion therapy on herself.. I mean. I can understand wanting to push through and just get over a damned hurdle that's holding you back, but... damn.
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Except a Cutie Mark expresses a pony's special talent. A focal point of who they are as a being. It'd be quite awkward for her life to boil down to nothing more than a baby maker. Based on the fact it's an Ankh, it's more likely to stand for being able to accept life as a whole, good and bad. Egyptian beliefs revolved around the concept of harmony in all things.
This story is an okay one, but it has many inconsistencies and things I simply don't agree with logically.
For instance, the whole discord turning people into ponies thing. The story made it sound like it was because he wanted to solve a future of the planet dying due to war, with friendship or something. That sounds good and all... but how exactly does changing people's species prevent everyone from dying from an invasion? How does it make friendship and peace world wide? Even if it does, how will that stop the alien invaders? If anything, it only hinders the goal of survival by making things more difficult and causing chaos.
Then there's the matter of the quantity of people being changed. You would think that it would be more beneficial to turn everyone into ponies at the start, but I can let that slide in the name of chaos. But the problem here is 2 things that just don't sit well with me. One, at some point the news mentioned mass disappearances (obviously new ponies) but this chapter contradicts that by showing only 1 pony in a huge area. What, is that only luck that no humans changed in this area and thousands changed elsewhere? And secondly, how in the world do that many human changed ponies simply not get noticed at all? Unless of course, the author simply forgot about writing that there was more than only a few. Hmmm.
Moving on... Character behaviors. They are decent,yes, but it could really be much better. The characters in this story often behave or interact unrealistically. For example, all of the humans who have interacted with the ponies reacted very little or were not surprised at all. Sure, you can say that they witnessed the fair event, but even then, what or who the ponies are were not explained to everyone while you are also assuming everyone was whiteness for the brief introduction. Even for those who were, after they were requested to give the ponies space, they simply left and were never seen from again without issue. This is not normal.
THEN there's the whole "mental block" thing. I'm by no means an expert... But, the whole idea is just weird to me. Is Alexa actually imagining a wall and telling herself that she is disgusted even though that reaction in itself should be muted by conscious thought of "I am a female now so it's okay"? That's what it looks like at least. But if so, it should have been much easier and faster for the wall to break, and even after it did, she should still be feeling some oppressed feeling of wrongness with dating a male and disgust when partaking in love making with one, such thoughts and feelings seem impossible to completely rid of with the breaking of a "wall", only lessoned over time. And.. how does she know the wall is broken? Instinct? Magic? Logically, she should have fealt it slipping away long before it happend, so she shouldn't be so happy about it. I refuse to believe all of her "male self" is just poof gone in an instant.
And I'll also breifly mention the cause of that in the first place... Loki forcing(?) Alexa to buck the guy. See, this wouldn't be too much of an issue if their relationship was built up more, and AFTER the "wall" itself had been solved more. It's just... Weird. Guy turns into girl who immediately prefers guys because she wants to be a straight girl.. and immediately develops a crush on a guy... And immediately bucks that guy even though she isn't okay with it at all. Also guy is okay with girl being a guy before from the very start. All with very little buildup.
I don't know, if those who read this is okay with all of that then good for you, you got a great story ahead for you. But, not for me. I will unfortunately be calling it quits here, and so begins my quest to find yet another replacement to fill the time.
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Old comment but, I like their newer stories and think they’re a lot more enjoyable