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What would you do if your left along the side of a road, no memory, no clue what your name is, and the only clues you have are a black and white striped scarf and a metal leg? Then there is of course the onslaught of mysterious events that seem to follow you around. So what is a pony to do?

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I like the ideas, and the foreshadowing...

The darkness... It's inhabited :rainbowderp:

All the fun plots.

Not their flanks either. :trollestia:

And much writing did we do. :raritywink:

A mysterious pony wakes up to find himself with no memory

DOWNVOTE.

why do you say
minutes EARLIER
when it seems like you mean later

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I can answer that!

He's trying to say that it's slightly earlier on, from what had just been happening.

Like, so he can cover everyponies point of view when they first see the dragon.

2428164 Yep yep yep!

Comment posted by Aleksandr Sherbet deleted Apr 21st, 2013

You sir or madam get a favorite and a like from me.

2459658 :applejackconfused: Madam!? It is sir I'll have you know, and thanks :derpytongue2:

Awww pinkie cares for Jason.

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Welcome Sir or Madam, Would you like to purchase something? :pinkiehappy:

5 points if reference is gotten.

By the way, GLaDOS called: she wants her cookbook back in time for the Hunger Games.
:trollestia:

2521829 I'll give it back, but I'm just going to steal it again. I mean why wouldn't I, my pickpocketing is at 100.:derpytongue2:

yay netha chptre! toow :scootangel:

Fine have it your way.

:trixieshiftright::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::twilightangry2: those would have Pinkie's emotions, in order, if she saw them.

2792225 I have no idea how I would describe that scene if Pinkie saw. Or maybe I'm just lying and I know exactly how she'll react, and I am typing it out right now.

2792260 You, sir are a tease.:ajbemused:

this sucks...jk man well done

-pinkies thoughts- darn i was hoping he wouldnt react in time :pinkiecrazy:

I freakin LOVE this story! Very well written and very nice pace to it. Keep it up man! Can't wait for more!

Do you have something Vs. Ppl naming their electronics?!?! Me, beast(win 98 laptop), Pancake (win vista laptop) and Zuse (my asus laptop) are offended lol....

2887137 No no nothing wrong, just Vinyl isn't original when coming up with names :3.

so is celestia gonna have twilight try to study Words of Origination from are mystery hero to understand it since it a new magic?

2940621 She could but the thing the only ones who really know the Words of Origination are Luna, Celestia, and Jason (as well as a few other's maybe :raritywink:.) And Luna and Celestia made sure that they are a forgotten magic. So she could try to learn it, but that would be going against Celestia's best wishes.

was does celestia have to know every single unknown thing in most stories and events it take the surprise of unknown and guessing..."sigh."

2940832 To be fair she doesn't know what Jason is

*shutters* I dont go on tumblr much, what hs been seen cannot be un-seen

2961091 don't worry it's fine. I'm just saying if you want to see what Jason has been up to check over there. *nudge *nudge *wink *wink.

Nice full metal alchemest refrence lol

3112893 Yay!!! Someone got it! :pinkiehappy:

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Something tell's me that Discord visited the the Metal Gear: Solid universe. Then for the LOLZ got the guy to come with him. Let the chaos... ENSUE! :pinkiecrazy:

That poor, poor bastard

3770769 He said, 'what could go wrong on making some deliveries!' I know books. Something bad was going to happen.

3770776 good intuition, and man you are fast reader.

3770803 Just started it today. Hey, who said Tweens can't read quickly?

NNNOOOOOOOOO UPDATE THE BOOK!! I WANT MOAR!!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage:

3770998 I'm sorry I have been dealing with both stress and school. I have the rest of the seriers planned out, but currently I am not updating, But there is a tumblr as well as future events taking place in this story.

3772900 Yay, and props for getting your OC put in 'Time to Go'. I also sense shipping between Dash and Hunter. My reading/foreshadowing/shipping sense be tingling. :raritywink:

3772919 Nah MasterHunter55 is a friend of mine. Also there was this picture on my tumblr. So maybe not to far off.

3773521 I plan on finishing this story. Chapter twenty three, fuck logic. I refuse to take two days to read that books! But it's twelve already. Fuck. My dreams are ruined!

may I ask what has happend to this story? i use to read it over and over again on my old account general grievous9995, is this ever going to be updated? it still says incomplete?

8062388 I was writing this during my last year of high school. I had alot of free time then. This is also when I met Master hunter. We would get together and write, but he ended up moving and we lost the time to write. Then I went to college and lost alot of my free time.

There is also just alot of stuff that I want to fix from this series. Such as pacing, interactions, the magic basis, etc...

I still want to finish​ this series, heck I still have the idea for how it would end and future sequels. Jason has always been a near and dear character to my heart that I always think of his story.

8063144 good to hear you are still thinking about this story!

and good to hear from you as well, i hope everything has been going smoothly for you!
I don't have long to type so all i will say is, Good luck my friend!

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