(I am currently in the process of trying to make this into a story but with me working on 3 other fanfics I won't be able to get to this one anytime soon. So in meantime check out my current stories that are up.)
Princess Luna looked at the folder full of letters that were addressed to her and the numerous soldiers in her castle from Big Mac who had infiltrated to Solar Empire. After a short sigh and a tear sliding down her face, she opened the folder and started to look at the letters that Big Mac sent.
I don't expect this to get many likes/faves or even appear on the "Featured List" but it was something I promised my friends i'd do for them since they all wanted me to do it. So enjoy the letters!
P.S. There will be a bit of a story before every letter stating where the letter can be found and at the end there will be a confrontation between Big Mac and Celestia so expect an interesting read.
P.P.S. This is a fanfiction of The New Lunar Republic and it is just a series of letters that Big Mac had sent. The reasons the letters are accented is so when you read them you can better read it in big mac's voice.
Yeah...no.
How the hell do you write a letter in an accent, anyway?
Wooh! Let's read this shindig! I have no knowledge whatsoever about New Lunar Republic apart from what I just guessed from this. I'll give you my feedback on the other side.
Oh, that comment cleared up a lot of confusion. Also you wrote abck. You might wanna fix that
Ok, this isn't looking good. While you have a nice plot (no pun intended) this has too many references to your thread to be easily read by an outsider. If you re-wrote this with some more information then this could be quite good. Now I know that this is basically just a spinoff of your thread but it has the potential to be so much more.
This could have been so much better with maybe a storyline to accompony it. As it was it wasn't so great.
2322655 Well if you read then you would see that its SUPPOSED to be a collection of letters not a whole story outright.
2322953 I guess you're right, but I think this would make a good story nonetheless
2323010 I am currently in the process of trying to make this into a story but with me working on 3 other fanfics I won't be able to get to this one anytime soon. So in meantime check out my current stories that are up.
2323010 Im sure either the romantic comedy or the dark tragedy will suit your interests.
2322953 I shall read those stories forthwith.
pretty good except all of the bloody oc ponys.
2331231 It was from a thread so... yeah i felt obligated to give shout-outs of sorts.
i can respect that