Double Agent Big Macintosh

by JXWheeler

Day 3

A letter addressed to Eric could be found on the pony's pillow as a cloaked figure leaped out the window.

"Dear Eric Ulibarri,

During my time as a guard pony for Princess Celestia ah have managed to uncover some of the Special Forces' Advanced Technology. Ah have copied them to a flash drive and have included it in this letter. Please use it to better equip the guards and your special forces troops. Ah will keep collecting what information ah can so wish me luck.

P.S. You owe me an Ale for nearly getting caught and killed for this info!

P.S.S. Ale is a common form of beer.

Your suicidal friend, Big Mac"

Author's Note:

Eric is an OC pony in the group.

Comments

[DetectivePingles]

Ok, this isn't looking good. While you have a nice plot (no pun intended) this has too many references to your thread to be easily read by an outsider. If you re-wrote this with some more information then this could be quite good. Now I know that this is basically just a spinoff of your thread but it has the potential to be so much more.