My name's PJ. I'm from New York. I write pony fics. I go to parties with bronies. I'm not good at self-introduction.
Dinky Hooves meets a new pony at the playground one day, whose mother is one of Pinkie Pie's sisters. They hit it off right away, but will their parents get along? Will the kids be allowed to play together? Am I being too presumptuous in labelling this a comedy? Read and find out!
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*Stands up from adorable dinky induced heart failure.* Sorry about that the cuteness caused me to pass out. This deserves a track and watch. Kudos. What's a kudos? You know... I never thought about it. Wait! Pinkie how many times have I told you to stop shattering my monitor with your forth wall breaking questions? Seven... Oh well... look at the time... gotta go bye! *She vanishes in a pink blur.* Confound that pony, she drives me to buy new monitors. At least she pays for the gas... and the monitors... Argh never-mind.
Oh, dear. I can see a problem on the horizon and its name is Inky........
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww......this whole chapter was made of d'aaaawww--both the cute and the sad types.
This was really fun to read. Dinky and Derpy bonding make for the best stories ever. Poor Suzie! I guess Inkie Pie's as big a stick in the mud as her parents huh?
Heh, the wavy lines remark was really funny! Kudos!
D'awwwwww. That was so sweet.
Why do the best stories have to go by so fast? 
Moar please.
As the previous few comments said...
DDDDDDAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW!
Thank you for giving my day some much needed D'awwww
D'aaaaaaaw. Derpy's explanation was so adorable! She is the best mom EVER!
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D'aaaawwwww!!! PINKIE Y U NO GET UR SISTER TO LOOSEN UP?
Aww. I think my heart exploded at Derpy's eye speech.
Something tells me Inkara will find the girl unsupervised an not be happy about it.
Aww, poor Suzie.
She never got to do any of those things before. Still D'awww though. 
Inkara? I AM A MARE
(PUNCH)
This has been really great keep up the good work
Love this story! Can't wait to see Inkera's reaction to Suzie and Dinky off on their own. Is there another chapter planned?
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There is, and I have it in first draft, but I'm really not happy with it. In the words of my writing idol, William Goldman, I'm putting a bag over my head and doing it for Old Glory. One way or another, though, the story will be finished.
Ah, well....no matter how distant it is, a happy ending is still a happy ending.
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I never said it would be happy, but it's up now.
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Oh. So they never do really get together. I just hope that Suzie doesn't get as advanced a case of broomstick-up-the-plot as her mother.
awwww! That was such a cute chapter!
What is wrong with you man? Are you trying to kill people with DAWWW
overloads? Because it's WORKING!!!!
There are no words. It's just that great.
I can wish it wasn't over, and I can respect your decision to end it here. Doesn't mean I have to like it, though.
Beautifully written, too, just... augh. That's not quite a tear-jerker. Can we call it a heartstring jerker?
The ending of this chapter.. epic. So touching.
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Thanks. I think that speech is one of the best things I've written.
Hey wait a minute...if Pinkie Pie's involved in this storyline, then why isn't she part of the list of characters at the title of this tale ?
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She's not really involved. She'd just referenced, and that's in a flashback.
"rough and course and it gets everywhere" her dad is darth vader/anakin?
cute, gonna enjoy this.
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costumereference!She heard of others who said the worst thing for a child was a pegasus parent? How racist can some ponies get?
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You need to read on. It's a metaphor.
I ought to say that to my hot wings "Bake up nice and hot boys"
Inkie: Don't get hurt!
Me: That's nothing, when I was their age I purposefully tried to slide down concrete that was situated at a 90 degree angel.
(Yes I did. My sister and I would. The slides were better, but going down concrete was unusual so we kept trying it)
2596280 Silly me.
No more....... and a complete sign. Whhhhyyyyyyy? Oh well can there at least be a inkling about in the future or something. Also you have won a fabulous prize I randomly picked you to do a read-a-thon! That means I am going to read all your stories even the incomplete ones, and randomly comment as I read your stories inculding start finish times. Note I do sleep and whatnot sooooo yeah.
3916864 Cool! You will find more about Dinky, but it'll be a long search.
I really love how you showed the differences when they take a bath,
Nice but i really hope Dinky sees her friend again someday