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Lucen Aurora


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He's Celestias son, heir to the throne should anything happen to his mother and aunt Luna. Which essentially means just like every other Prince or Princess of Equestria he has no real responsibilities and a great deal of time on his hooves. What sets him apart from the pack however, is that he is odd. Not odd as in a third eye or a forked tongue, but odd in the way he views and reacts the world around him. Few ponies come away with from an encounter with the prince without scratching their heads in wonderment at how a pony like him could ever be an Prince, let alone an Alicorn.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 13 )

Sounds like an 'off the wall' character.

Okay, I love this story, and because I love it I am offering my services as a proofreader. Somethings to look out for, avoid making the prince overpowered. Describe the prince a little better, and make sure not to screw up his dialogue. I love it as is, and it would be interesting to see how his character develops. Remember to create conflict for him to solve later on. A few questions I have, Is he smart? What are his emotions? What is up with being horny, jus kiddin'. As for everything else not bad, but if you need someone to work out your typos, I can do that. Just send me a message. Now I will leave my signature as a review person around these parts. Sorry for the vagueness, I'm about to go to bed. Anyways...

Final Verdict: Who fucked Celestia?

Okay, I can honestly say this is the first time I have ever seen a Popeye reference in an MLP fanfic before. And...I LOVE IT!!!!:pinkiehappy::heart: The Prince is delightfully quirky.:scootangel:

Kudos to you for your amazing wordplay. I am excited to see where this is going.

Like. Favorite. Comment: I really like this story.:pinkiehappy:

so this is in the distant near future.

of course, dumb as a brick Lucky may be, but he's got a bleeding heart of gold that's been trained by the best spymasters in equestria.

quite unexpected, but it does brick joke perfectly back to Synthect's laughter fit.

oh damn, this is the last chapter. :pinkiesick:

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