Twilight Sparkle had made several spells to send her and away to short locations. But a sonic rainboom makes her magic jump to the point in which she and the rest of her friends are sent to another world. They wake up in a dark room and soon realize that they aren't in Equestria anymore. With a statue that only moves when nopony is look, an old man that can move through wall, and a humanoid creature that can't look at you or else it will kill you, and many more things are loose in the facility. They need to work with three guards, two mobile task forces, and two D-class personnel to escape the horrid night mare of the SCP facility.
The Game scares me !
don't fuck this up
1978712 I'm so sorry.
Its not bad, but its not good so far. Then again, it is only the begining. I see potential for a good story, and I am going to see where this goes. Good luck!
Okay, either you stop fucking around and write it seriously or you don't write at all.
"Yep this story is crap. I'll finish it and never talk about it again." What the hell is this. Stop moaning, start writing. Clear out mistakes (quite stead of quiet and such typos) and make chapters short, scary (or gory) to give the story a feel of jumping from one room to another while they try to avoid the danger. There's something to the way you started the story. It's simple and in that case the less is more.
And you should be good to go.
But if you're gonna end a chapter with "yeah, this is shit, i'll finish taking it on your screen and then let's never talk bout this again, mkay?", then you're wasting my time. So decide.
I like it
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*GASP* I haven't even began to read this and already faved :3
Don't let me down now...
1978712 I second that...
This is WAY too good to fuck up.
This is so awsome! MMMMMMMOOOOOOEEEEEEERRRRRRRR!!!
1984954 I'm working on it.
1983981
I feel dumb now
1988367 Don't. You can't hear my words typed. If people could I wouldn't need that picture all the time.
Strange crossover but I'm loving it
OMFG This is awesome! This is one of the best fanfictions I've read in a long time
Don't you have autocorrect on or sth? Quite a lot of odd typos.
And I'm glad you didn't kill Fluttershy. Yet.
I have never played this game. It is turning out to be somewhat educational. Me need more story and more learning.
1993620 No. Look here for education.
I've only played the beta version so there aren't soldiers in it for me, but I've managed to turn power on and then get screwed over by the weeping angel knock off
You know what we need at some point?
Ether SCP-096 and/or SCP-682
That would make my week...
"welcome to hell" you have no idea how acurate that is
this is officially the best fan fic i have ever read its exiting nerve wrecking and addicting NEED MORE
2005448 Flattering. I'm working on the next.
2005601 thank you for for doing so cant wait
i said it once and ill say it again THIS IS THE BEST FAN FIC I HAVE EVER READ
yes sir
favoriting now sir
already liked so..
I found this, and thought you might like to know.
It was just something I noticed. I think you mean "impatient", but I could be wrong.
There's only one issue so far. What is SCP 137 doing? I don't think a girl who can posses toys feels the need to strangle Rarity
2011049 Damnit. I keep mixing the two up.
2011661 Yeah spoiler alert for new readers.
2011669 Sol1df3rr3t im so sorry forgive meeeeeeeee
2011669 there is that beter
2011693 Well I would just say 'oh well' to my self but I need to cover the comment with more comments.
2011701 or i could just delete it like i just did
2011712 I wasn't notified in time.
2011716 really it says i deteted it
in time
1: YAY A NEW CHAPTER!! I LOVE THIS FAN FIC!!
2: NOOOOOOOO ONE OF THEM DIED!!!
2011790 and i ate his/her soul muhahahahahahaha *looks at number 1* dude what you smoking
because its just not i love this fan fic no its I LOVE THIS FAN FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STOPS DRINKING COCA-COLA *BURP*
ya pretend that did not happen
2011816 i don't smoke and i really am addicted to this fan fic what? you got a problem with that? huh? HUH?
2011839 YA I HAVE A PROBLEM IT THIS FAN FIC THE FAN FIC THE AWESOMNESS IS 20% COOLER THEN ME
*stops drinking my coca-cola* ummmmmm ya
2011869 ...what you just said makes no sense...*drinks mountain dew* boo ya
2011881 *opens another can of coke* ya i get that lots .....................................*look to the left and sees pinkie slaping a fish*not my falt tho
2011898 yea but eve though you don't make sense (alot like pinkie pie) i can respect that...not making sense shows that your not afraid to be yourself
2011912 true true but everyone says i would be but i act and think like what is with that.......explane boomerpro97 the wise explane
2011973 yes the wise do explain...but they are also afraid to show who they really are *takes a sip of mountain dew* explaining why you are who you are is like a worrier without honer...
Excellent keep up the good work