Sequel to Agent Of Chaos and Help Me! My Parents Are Bronies!
It has been one year since the liberation of Ponyville from Queen Chrysalis and her Changeling swarm. When the town started to rebuild paranoia and hatred slowly crawled through the streets creating distrust among the citizens, the link between the Elements of Harmony and Twilight and her friends has been broken and the entire kingdom is now suffering. Civil unrest prowls the outer cities and enemies of Equestria are threatening to take over. Now in an act of desperation Princess Celestia has called upon a former exile for help. His mission is simple, go to his former home planet, retrieve the Creator and return to restore the balance of Harmony. The whole fate of Equestria rests on these two humans, but will they be tolerated among the Equestrians?
Authors note: I recommend that you read Agent Of Chaos and HMMPAB first, this story contains various plot elements and is a continuing story line for both stories. Also there are a lot more characters that are going to be featured in this story but I'm unable to add the tags for them because of limitations.
yay new story, can't wait for more
This is something that I haven't seen yet, I LOVE IT :D
So cruel.
But the again, Scott has gotta do what he needs to do.
Great Chapter!!
I wonder who they're going to try to convert or what they're going to do now
Oh and FIRST.
Read this chapter to get an idea as to what to do for the project. Was a good read, seems interesting. Found these two mistakes but otherwise, well done. I found it hard to visualize a few of Scott's gestures but that's just a nitpick.
"If they get close enough then they will incinerate Ponyville, Cloudsdale and Canterlot, we cannot allow that but even with our new allies we are powerless to stop them."
"I knew that I could trust you, Scott," Celestia said, "Even after I banished you and left you alone for over a year; you still forgive me."
And Douglas leaves his mark. I must say will Douglas enter the frey?
What the hell is with the "thousand year" increments? One thousand years ago...
•Nightmare Moon was banished to the moon
•Discord was imprisoned
•The Crystal Empire vanished along with King Sombra.
What the hell is it with millenia? Every thousand years all hell breaks loose. Exactly 1000 years after all that BS happened...
ks up everything
•Nightmare Moon returned to plunge Equestria into eternal night
•Discord returns and f
•Queen Chrysalis shows up and almost turns all of Equestria into an all-you-can-eat changeling buffet
•King Sombra returns along with the Crystal Empire and tries to enslave every Crystal Pony
•A human shows up and brings Discord back AGAIN
•A group of humans show up, one of which helped the return of the changelings, destroyed the bonds of the Elements of Harmony, as well as their town, and causes wide spread paranoia over the entire country
•AND, Dragons attempt to take over the weakened country.
Seriously! WTF!!!
I almost didn't want to start this when I saw it was on hiatus... but well here I am! So are you going to continue this story anytime soon or what?
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Maybe. I got other fics and a book to write as well. I'm still waiting for that artist to get back to me about the coverart though. It's been about four months, I think that it's done. Question is, where is the damn thing?
This series is amazing. I hope the haiatus let's up soon. An awesome read if I say so myself.
why the hiatus ITS TOO AWESOME FOR THAT
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I've been really busy for a long time and trust is that I don't really see this story going the distance as I wanted it to. As I look back this plot just seems kinda dumb to me now, I dunno, maybe I'll work on this in the future but as of now no. I've got better stories in the works.
I hope the hiatus ends soon, really enjoying the story so far.
3566177 i thought the plot was good it even featured faust in it and i do enjoy a creator coming to equestria fic
*Canterlot
I have to say that I have been enjoying this story. I do hope you take the time to complete this story. I am sorry to hear that you are losing your taste for this story and may not complete it. I do hope you change your mine.
Dragonfox
Heh, Pinkie will always be Pinkie