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i can already tell this will be good.....also first!

1. A new story from Liquid Rainbows = 5/5
2. 3333 words = 6/5
3. RD X SOARIN = 9000/5

Good show! :rainbowlaugh:

and it WAS awesome!

Well done. :moustache:

#6 · Jan 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Hmm...maybe next time, Spitfire will join in. :pinkiecrazy:

Assuming she hasn't tied Soarin's wings down and bucked him off the roof. It looks here like they've got a relationship going, so I *really* hope that what Soarin pulled here wasn't against their rules - because if it was, then he just went and, on a whim, decided to cheat on her.

But, like I said, I might be reading it wrong. Honestly hope I am, because otherwise it's a good story.

153598 why does everyone assume that Soarin x Spitfire?

Also... i really enjoyed this fic... although there are way to many RD X SN...


Well, in this case, it's because she's there in the room with him and getting flirty/hinting that she'd be open to the idea of screwing him if she weren't so tired....

If it weren't hinted at in the story, I wouldn't have said it. :pinkiehappy:

3,333 words? How the buck did you manage to do that?

You have a thy instead of thigh in there, also a than instead of then.

153422 Realy what other things has he done?

and then Spitfire was a zombie

Relationship = Rushed.
Dude... No one will say "Lets go and do it" right after they meet... Fuck...
Still, it was part of the story. 4.5/5

>>_awesomekik Rainbow is practically a groupie for the Wounderbolts, so that really is not that surprising.

My reaction was mixed. It went from: :pinkiesmile: *reading*
:pinkiegasp: *leading him back to her house*
:pinkiesick: *during the..er....engagement*
:pinkiecrazy: *after everything was done*
Mental images...SO MANY
But anyways, good story, keep it going XD

One thing: "thy's" :raritydespair:
Other than that: :yay:

153820 >Dude... No one will say "Lets go and do it" right after they meet... Fuck...


okay this is just me

but if I just got well and proper fucked and the guy immediately was like OMG THAT OTHER HOT CHICK MUST BE WONDERING WHERE I AM

I suspect I would be a little annoyed

After Rarity's Generous Plan, i can't read anything to do with WonderboltsxDash. :applecry:


While that is a good point, you have to remember that Spitfire is essentially, at least in most fics it seems, his boss as she is the team captain and would be pissed if he was too tired from being out all night doing who knows what (or who in this case) to perform at the next show.

the only thing that bothered me was incorrect grammar, other than that this was a fine read. Good job.

MM12 that's what she gets for blue balling him - you go you two crazy ponies!

>"You saved my pie!"

I can't resist... All I can think is:



:rainbowkiss: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild:

153940 Pika Ikea x Twilight shipping?

Liquid get on it.

amazing. have a moustached spike. :moustache:

Hi Lr Do u remember me? from the chat last night? i was the one swearingn my head off just to tell u my story was accepted and i was banned from the chat. good comes to worst ! but here have a heart with a scootaangel beacuse i'm being genorus to everyone for the way i acted in the chat last night srry.:heart::scootangel:oh ya and one last thing :trollestia:

siht si os emoswa. ho dna i evol tgniklat ekil siht.

173202 Ho, I detnaw ot llet uoy taht I yllaer, yllaer dekil siht yrots. Ti dah a yllaer ecin tolp. :trollestia:

M'i dalg ot ereh ouy dekil ti!

I'm a little surprised how OK she was with him just leaving like that... I would be offended and worried, but nonetheless, everything else was AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

I... I dont even know how to react to this :rainbowhuh: :applejackconfused: :twilightoops:


Oh gosh, I loved this. This was so well-written. I love how you wrote Dash, she was so insanely adorable. <3 Please write more to this!

Well, what can you say? IT'S LIQUID!

I love it when someone replies to a comment I made over four months ago and I don't even remember the context of the comment. It is even better when you don't understand what the person replying to your comment is saying.

You say that like it's happened to you way too many times.
You made a comment about 3,333 words, and I was saying, that Liquid can do anything he wants to, even if he's not trying. At least, that's what I was trying to say.

This has to be at least the fifth time. I thought you where responding to my last comment. I did not even see my first one.

*cough* How about you're both right and we call it a day? :twilightsmile:

Oh, wait, it's Liquid.
Never mind; I'll stop now.


wrong. Soarin was disappointed when he found out he had to share a room with spitfire.

Wow I want more RD and Soarin from you plz!!!:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

(So what if I'm 38 weeks late? :rainbowwild: )

Great story as usual, Liquid! Sorry it took me so long... I haven't been able to read very much in a while... Only thing I had an issue with was how well Dash took his leaving after everything... but I still loved it! Keep up the great work! :ajsmug:

309892 I think your Avatar says it all! :pinkiehappy:

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