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Liquid_Rainbows


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Awww...sweet)

Wow. Sweet, and very heart warming.

you do the best clop-fics

awesome, been waiting for a F/M with Vinyl

I would expect Dusk to tell Vinyl that she was drunk, and probably didnt have right judgement, so they become friends, start dating, move in together, ger married, have kids, raise the kids, those kids meet a stallion of their own. If you did that you could have made this story a shitload longer, and better because less than half of it is cloppy. The worst clopfics are the ones that dont have true love behind the clopping. Confessions and Considerations is a good example. Read it, and maybe its sequel if you want to know how to write the best clopfics you can. 3.5 stars, and a track. Expecting a 2nd chapter.

Sorry fo rudeness in the last wall of text. :fluttershysad:

169721
How about we agree on very very light gray? XD

Ah, you've done it again my good author! Take 5 internets for another awesome clopfic!
I must ask this because I ask all clopfic writers this.
Do you/Have you ever clopped to your own work? :rainbowhuh:
I swear, it's for research! :twilightblush:

-PwnyBrony:duck:

169801
No. I can get aroused while writing it, naturally, because of the things I'm imagining, but I can't clop to it.

Also, thanks! :twilightsmile:

Another excellent story

169503 :applejackconfused:

What the BUCK are you talking about?

169503 Hey, sorry but you did that to me too, saying that you were pulling the rating down to a 3.5 stars. Yet, for some reason, this story still has 5.0 stars. Also, if what you were saying was to happen, It probably wouldn't be a clopfic, now would it?

169849 i see what he meens like this story couldve been longer but like it ended and it was good and im sad i cant read more i love a vinyl stories and want to read as much of them as i could but this was short needless to say and i would like to read more from this author:pinkiehappy:

Yes.... Just, yes

Awesome but a new chapter would make it 20% cooler:rainbowdetermined2:

I always laugh when I read clopfics.:rainbowlaugh: How the fuck do people come up with this?

Da Fuq? Did a clop-fic just make me D'awww??????

You're not the only one Venatus

Congratulations on another featured fic! :twilightsmile:

169806
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

Seriously, I did... recently strongly consider clopping to my own stuff myself, but I decided not to. I guess you're the more restrained person/pony/fox/whatever. :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

This was a good story I just wish people did more fics with vinyl as one of the main character

Did I detect a DJ Alex S reference in this?:ajsmug:
moving on from that though, a very good read, as people have said before me, even though this is a clopfic I still managed to daaawww. Keep it up!:twilightsmile:

This was for some odd reason "cute".
This was a decent read, and was very happy to see a straight Vinyl fic for once.
As always awesome job and a nice tip of 5 stars :pinkiehappy:

169947 The cloppiness part doesnt have to take up the entire story. Like I said, think Confessions and Considerations with clopping wherever it was missing.

172345 you sir are epic for posting that

Hmm.... So reading the comments, I can see that this will be a good clopfic! :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowderp:.... WHOA. That's all I can say, whoa. That was different from other clopfics... Incredible. 5 stars for you!:rainbowlaugh:

Very nicely written, as always, Liquid. Not usually one for Vinyl Scratch fics, but you made me like her in this one! :ajsmug:

great read! easy 5 stars from me :pinkiecrazy:

lol u good at dis :trollestia:

You.......are crazy and deserve a medal! :moustache::pinkiecrazy:

Well written, but there are some mistakes...

Aside grammar and spelling, I think that you should put the 'will you remember me?' phrase away... I mean it was simply a ons...

Cool story bro
but can i ask
can u make one with spitfire?

I don't understand my brain tells me I just read clop but my heart tells me I read a beautiful and heartwarming romance.

I see Dusk isn't Above The Influence.

172345 That melted my boner away and its not coming back

175778
172345

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:

>that moment when you stumble upon a random fanfic while browsing
>that moment when you think you are reading a regular story and you find out half way through its a clopfic
>that moment when find yourself enjoying said clopfic
>that moment when the ending actually made you feel all warm and happy
This was a great story and I want more

So I put myself in the place of Dusk for this one, and as soon as Vinyl had her first line I totally swooned and said "ohmygodshestalkingtome!" out loud. I think it's just because it's 2:30 in the morning and I'm really tired, but God dammit I was excited. :pinkiehappy:

Very good read. Nice to see an clopfic that was some passion behind it. :scootangel:

I'll admit to not being very comfortable with Vinyl as anything other than a hardheaded dyke...
but this was marvelous.

I do kind of agree with awesomekik...

But I don't entirely agree, since it does make all the difference in the world (to me) that there's that last little bit about Scratch remembering him in the morning. To be honest, if I was in Dusk's hooves it would probably hurt worse to just be placed in as 'part of her collection' and then left alone... then not ever having her at all. It would be like a sword through the heart to not be with her again when she's so perfect. That's why I like relationshipfics so much better than one-night-stand-fics.

>Though, I should confess that my own clopfics end in marriage followed by a daughter, which is rather on the extreme end :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy:

198995
Well it's a good thing they have an entire section for "romantic" clopfics.

I agree with you and awesomekik. The thing is, I'm horrible at writing anything outside of sex scenes, so I'm a little confined to just writing one-night-stands.

200138
But you're an awesome writer! Go ahead and take a stab at writing a sequel where, say, Dusk decides to give his wife some "motivation" for coming up with a song for her new album one bored, cold winter morning-- when their little kid, say, named 'Audacity' or something pun-ish like that is asleep and doesn't know what her parents are up to. Or maybe something fun like that. You can do it!

I'm really tempted to try writing that myself if you don't. There should be moar to this story. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

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