• Published 30th Dec 2012
  • 12,318 Views, 92 Comments

The Perfect Couple - bats



Twilight and Rainbow have been spending an awful lot of time together, of course somepony might get the wrong idea.

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all i can say this is just hot i just love this couple. and the title explains it the perfect couple.

and that Spike, is Voyeurism ....you will enjoy when you're older

Hey this was pretty great! :twilightsheepish:

this was hilarious

Aahhh i was just thinking wheres spike towards the end. Cute lil oneshot :raritywink:

Spike being there at the end was my idea! Bow before me!

Hilarious imagine what they have to do for spike his mind has just probably been fucked

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We would, but your name demands we lynch you instead.

1873693 Exactly! I loved it. Especially the cute cover image

1873634 That idea was genius well done

1873737 DashFire master race. (I know it contradicts my name)

1873756 Thanks mate. XD

1873827
You spelled TwiDash wrong.

1873827>>1873833 You both Twilestia wrong.

1873836 How about AppleFire/SpitJack?

1873833 DashKitchensink! What now!?

1873854 Eww! How bout Rarijack

1873854>>1873852

How 'bout I ship my fist with your faces. :pinkiecrazy:

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Don't make me turn this fic around. I'll start writing nothing but Scootaspike, I swear to god.

1873862 No. AppleTwiDashFireScootDaringDerpyCloudFlitSoarin ultra-giga-win.

1873867 No! You must write of Scotaloo McPoultry of Scootland!

1873864 You really wanna get whooped doncha?

1873864 That might just be the best comment ever.

1873867 You won't!

Comment posted by Flint Easthoof deleted Dec 30th, 2012

1873869 Ship all the ponies!

1873867

I totally forgot about your love of foalcon. Age-regression Dash with Scoots and Twi. DO EET

1873885 don't forget Celestia.

Bueno...
Spike will learn of his luck this day when he's older.
Anyway, good story. :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

The esceletion of the story rose at an alarming rate

I came... Only once though.

:twilightoops: I thought this would stay private...
:rainbowderp: I didn't tell anyone anything...
:moustache: Rarity gave me a new moustache for the play by play.
:duck: What can I say darlings? It was sexy as hell...

plus a plot.

plus a fuckload of plot.:facehoof:

Hot hot hot!!! Thumbs up! :heart:

Absolutely hilarious. Definitely a good read, now to go back to waiting on chapters for Coming Back and the other stories I'm reading.

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...Or maybe I should be working on that. Hm.

Cool that something that I could fap to:rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:

That was.. insane.

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That is quite the undertaking, haha. I feel so privileged to be up-to-date with you! :rainbowlaugh:

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Honestly I don't even know how I accumulated that many. It just sorta happened over time. :raritydespair:

Man, I've already read in excess of 7M words on this site. I'll probably double that or more by the time I catch up on all the stories I have tracked haha.

Ooooo a clop fic. I will enjoy this.

I don't know if I can take another one of these

Thats what she said.

That's nasty Tia.

Will you two stop before I beat you both.

And the Plot thickens...

Will you stop that.

Make me Luna.

your both grounded now shut up so I can read.

i had to stop when I got to the shouting match. I will contune this later. You have already earned my fave and Up Vote and a watch. Dont dissapoint me.

That is some delicious sexual tension there! Loved this fic to pieces :heart: I've always thought TwiDash could have some bickering in it as well :)

1877376 You seem to have what i like to call MPD.

*chuckles* Reminds me of me and my husband in the early days. How the story ended is similar to how we kinda got together. Great work! Made me laugh a little! :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowlaugh:

~Raxel~:heart:

shit, oh poor spike.

That was awesome. Spontaneous sex at its finest.

1877444
From your comment alone you seem like you'd be pretty difficult to disappoint. :trixieshiftleft:

ANGREHSECKS!
+1Thumb!:rainbowkiss:

1880453I had to stop because you broke my cool. I very nearly started rolling the ground while laughing (I believe this is the correct phrase)

Easy and simple to read, yet quite vivid/engaging. I loved it!

LOL at the ending. :rainbowlaugh:

1879504MPS actually, although I'm no longer allowed to put the other voices down in my comment as the admins consider it Role Playing *rolls eyes*

Crap, I told myself I would read this tonight but of course I got wraped up in the festivies and now have a huge migrain... promis to finally read tomorrow. Good night and
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