After an accident with the Kanohi Olmak, Takanuva finds himself stranded in a new dimension and stuck in a new form. With no way to get home to his own universe, he has resigned himself to living out a peaceful existence in his new home, but his past will soon catch up to him in a way that could be disastrous for not just his world, but for all of them.
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Not a bad story at all, though it is a little rough around the edges. Looking forward to seeing how this goes.
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Technically practise is a valid spelling when used as a verb and not a noun: http://www.future-perfect.co.uk/grammartips/grammar-tip-practise-practice.asp
Yaaaay , The heroes of my early childhood combined with the most awesome cartoon show ever made. This is epic :D
My inner Bionicle nerd is now vary happy.
BIONICLE... YES. YESSSS.
I humbly request MOAR.
Let's see I think he forgot the Staff of Life. and Brutaka, one of my fav Bionicle heroes turned bad then back to good.
The Toa of Light. Meeting Celestia... John Jonesco's picture of Takanuva riding Celestia comes to mind...
Also: I'd think he'd be a very handsome looking stallion.
Edit: What about his power of twilight, you'know? After he had his light drained?
PLUS: If they ever see his true form, I think RD would faint from the awesome.
577896 And the Kanohii Olmak.
578254 That too.
Celestia does not sound happy.
...EVERYBODY PANIC!!!!!
Finally!!! A true Bionicle crossover! I've been waiting ages for this.
578254 Technically he already knows that he lost that one, so he hasn't really 'forgotten' it.
Anyway, thanks for all the comments, this is a fairly surprising response for my first fic. It means a lot to me.
580098 Well, this was my childhood growing up, and ironically, My Little Pony is my adulthood.... So yeah, wonderful nostalgic mix.
Wouldn't Takanuva be confused as to what hunger and eating are? I mean, he did use to be mechanical.
I think the only problems with this so far is that Takanuva's dimension-hoping adventures have not been fully explained, and that you had Twilight using bad grammar. Twilight and bad grammar do not compute. Period. It's like heresy.
please please please update soon
BIONICLE + Ponies... I think I just had a nerdgasm...
faverit childhood toys mixed with ponies...SO MUCH WIN.
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A Bionicle is a Biomechanical being. They are part organic and part machine. The organic part includes a stomach, muscles, and a few other things. The mechanical part is their basic structure. In some cases in the books, witch I read them all, Bionicle characters talk about finding food to eat.
LewaBolt asks that you write more, not a bad mix of Bionicle and MLP.
Not bad, not bad at all.
Quick question, is this fic dead? There aren't many Bionicle/MLP crossover fics, even fewer that aren't either ponified bionicle world or very poorly written. Please continue!
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Well, it's not quite dead, but I've been quite busy with other things recently, so I've only been able to write every now and again, so I don't know when I'll finish the next chapter, but I do hope to do so at some point.
Ты живой?Вставай сука!На работу!Говно чистить!
2048085 Russian, huh?
IT'S ALIVE IT'S ALIVE IT'S LIVE!!!!! And FIRST
let the battle for ponyville begin
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That is a fair question. Remember: they are also biological. They can feel hunger, but they are also part mechanical as well.
Insert Rarity faint here
Can you please continue making the story because I'm so eager find out more!!!
Oh boy how will Takanuva get out of this mess?