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*You must read parts 1 & 2 in order to understand what is happening here*
Twilight and the others are finally in Canterlot, reading to face off with Chrysalis. But when Chrysalis defeats the Elements, and the brainwashed Celestia awakens, the mane 6 must find another way to save Equestria.

This is the final battle and part 3 of "The Reception" trilogy!

Link to part 1: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/51231/The-Reception%27s-Been-Canceled-

Link to part 2: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57427/The-Reception%27s-Back-On

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Comments ( 155 )

Oh this is so exciting so far. I can't wait to read more!

WHEEEEEEEEEEWEEEEWWWWW!!!!!!:pinkiegasp:

Hoorey for part threy :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

wait where is Blinkie? wasn't she with Princess Luna in Ponyville? i hope the others are okay

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She's probably with the army outside of the castle. Don't worry, we'll see her :raritywink:

First off, nice start to the third act of the storyline as it seems that Chrysalis was BUSY for this plan. :rainbowderp:

Man, this plan truly took the heroes by surprised indeed. I can't even think of what will happen next in this tale of yours.... :twilightoops:

Will Sweetie Belle be freed in this storyline of yours and how will she take the news of the death of...:scootangel: ?:unsuresweetie:

Please do keep up the good work upon such an exciting storyline.:pinkiehappy:

Twilight, you idiot. Forget Chrysalis, you should have fired the elements towards Celestia.

How long is this final part going to be? About the same as 2?

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It's probably going to be the shortest out of the 3. Maybe longer chapters than part 2, but not as many chapters. I'm not 100% sure yet.

1573572 I was just thinking that it would be kinda cool if Spike comes up with a plan that involves him getting greedy and wanting Twilight and his friends to all be safe, causing him to grow into a giant dragon and destroying queen crysalis

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Nah, as seen, he can't control himself in his "greed form", hence he would take the ponies, but then anything else in reach to hoard it. But i think too, Spike should show up with a plan. And i still wonder:

If the changelings feed upon POSITIVE energy, and Celestia is FULL of it, how in the creators name is Chrysalis able to "control" her? Wouldn't that simply just power Celestia up instead of brainwash her? :rainbowhuh:

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She said the energy she fed into Celestia was tainted by dark magic. She most likely had a spell on Celestia, that when the energy entered her, it turned into negative energy or something.

*eye-twitches* Ok, that was all i could take...

Well, that's it for him.

oh no please don't kill shining armor he has to live and marry princess cadance, and have the chance to rut her lol:fluttershbad::applecry:

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Well, that explains it a bit :pinkiehappy:

Oh, and have an awesome mustache :moustache:

Or two :pinkiehappy: :moustache::moustache:

Is that bomb a pipebomb? Just asking random question here.

AAAnd he earned it. Good save too bad the element of magic has been shattered.:facehoof:

Somebody set up us the bomb.

I was confused as to why everyone is all in a frenzy about Shining Armor, but then I remembered that I started writing Chapter 3, and so I know his outcome and you guys don't yet, lol.

Holy long chapter Batman!:pinkiegasp::twilightoops:

but extremely good and very exciting. i hope princess luna isn't killed, but if for some reason celestia and luna are killed i wonder if equestria will turn to twilight to lead them if she defeats crysalis

Nice rescue by the Pie sisters, now it on to find the others, right ? :pinkiehappy:

Do keep up the good work upon such a great story.:twilightsmile:

Damn it twilight you should have gathered the shattered fragments of the crown they could have proven useful at some later time.:facehoof:

Well, the elements broke before and fixed themselves in the second episode. she should remember that and pick up the pieces.

Hah, i knew they would come to that conclusion with the Elements :facehoof:

But still a wonderful chapter. I wonder what kind of sedative Chrysalis used to get Discord drugged :rainbowderp:

Ohhhh Luna can de scramblify Unicorns who were gotten by the changeling magic. Now Trixie, Flam and Rarity are off to free Princess Cadence. This is all so exciting <3

Man, even when she's saved and her mind's back to normal, Trixie's still a pain in Flank. :trixieshiftright:

Nice to see Sweetie Belle okay and alive, but it makes me wonder how will she handle Scootaloo's death ? :unsuresweetie:

Great spotlight on Rarity as I knew they couldn't leave Sweetie Belle behind...again.:raritydespair:

Do keep up the good work. :raritywink:

ohh are we gonna see Sweetie belles reaction to scootaloos death?

also happy to see trixie back to normal, can't wait to see trixie and twilight meet again

I will still never agree with you killing off Scootaloo.

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Stuff happens.
I have another story where she is alive and well!:twilightsmile:

1611582 It was the way you killed her off. People are way to hard on her and you could have used her and the crusaders so brilliantly if she lived.

:rainbowwild: Rainbow your assistance is needed!

Lose Trixie, gain Cadence. Trixie will probably end up in some cocoon or become scrambled again. Or she could realize that Twilight's group is her best shot at survival *hint hint*.

"That's not even the worse"
"Since they had so much access energy"
WHAT AM I DOING HERE I SHOULD BE WRITING AN ESSAY :facehoof:

Trixie comes back just in time to save Twilights life a second time. this time with purpose.

My guess is that Trixie will return when they gang "needs" her the most. :trixieshiftright:

Nice to see Princess Candace free, but where are the other elements and are they safe ? :rainbowhuh:

I guess Rainbow Dash may be where the Wonderbolts are.:rainbowkiss:

Shorter chapter than the rest and shorter than I would have liked, but I can't go overexerting Rainbow Dash in her condition right now!:rainbowwild:

:rainbowderp: No RD the best as been slowed to a crawl. I guess I can wait to see Dash's awesome-ness.

poor RD, that has to be one of the worst things to happen to a pegasus, a hurt wing.
will Rainbow dash find any surviving wonderbolts in the army, like say Spitfire?

Better to have a broken wing, than it is to be dead. Rainbow Dash should truly count herself lucky in this adventure. :rainbowderp:

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