This is Part 2 of "The Reception's Been Canceled"!
(link to part 1: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/51231/The-Reception%27s-Been-Canceled-)
The Mane 6 have now reunited, and with the help of others, they begin their journey back to Canterlot in order to battle with Queen Chrysalis and take back Equestria.
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Hmm interesting start on 2nd part of story.
But i hope you won't make Chrysalis just next dumb villain with big ego for power. But after that Discord release hmm
wow just gahhhh i love this story so freakin much lol
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Thank you!!! I'm so glad
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also i thank you for finally letting us readers know what is happening with Spike. i know i've been pestering you about him lol
I should think that taking on the griffons would be a rather antisocial way for her species to commit suicide.
Great intro to storyline as Spike's letter explained a bit of what the Changelings overall plan are.
It makes me think that we may see Gilda in this storyline of yours, right ?
Also I must say even through the danger, he'll do whatever it takes to make Rarity happy and that means, watching over Sweetie Belle when she's not there.
Great update overall, but I wonder who will react to Spike's letter first ?
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
Part 2! Yay!
One typo found: "The changeling's can't harvest"
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Thanks!
Chapter 2! A little boring, but we're setting up the stage for battle. Someone needs to take charge, and I'm sure wearing her magic-Element-crown, Twilight definitely looks the part.
Woooo hoooo they got a plan. Twilight ur awesome.
I just recently discovered my interest in spitfire. I hope her and the wonderbolts are okay
Awww no Leroy jenkins? Fine...
I do love a build up moment.
I can suppose that Rainbow Dash's reunion with Gilda will not go well despite desperate times.
Even Twilight told Applejack to put aside her anger for the moment.
Still nice update as I can't wait to see what happens next in this tale of yours.
".." when you mean "...", twice in paragraph 3.
"canon" when you mean "cannon", thrice.
"Rarity, how are your legs
,?aAre you able to walk now?""I can walk no problem." - I suggest putting a comma after "walk", or "I can walk without a problem", or otherwise re-writing it.
Am I being annoying? I seem to be doing this every other chapter or something.
Is it wise for them to split up the Elements? If one of the Elements gets stolen, then none of them work, unless you are planning some way to make them work. Better to keep them all in one place, someplace safe, such as Zecora's hut. Of course, if one of the Mane 6 is incapacitated, the Elements won't work either, but splitting the Elements just adds something that might go wrong. Unless you are planning for them to be used remotely or something.
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No, not annoying! I want to improve my writing, so any help is appreciated! I think part of the main problem is, I write really late at night, and I get so excited about what I'm writing about that I just don't notice these things, and I don't go back and edit
. I know I've done ".." a couple of times now, and I'm not sure why... I guess I just think when it's in speech, it doesn't necessarily matter, because speech can be sporadic and speech isn't always grammatical. Or I've just become lazy.
And I know specifically I kept writing "canon" because I had just had an intense conversation about Disney canon, and what was and wasn't canon, and that was still in the back my mind.
Anything could go wrong in relation to the Elements. The point of each pony being responsible for their own Element, was so that one pony wouldn't be singled out directly if there was a massive attack. And they can't leave the Elements at Zecora's, they need them with them when they get to Canterlot.
a double update. i feel so lucky. applejack is one of my fav ponies
oh thank goodness. when i realized that they were at sugarcube corner my thoughts went immediately to the twins. i'm so glad they are okay.
Titan should be changeling hohoho
Man, Fluttershy is really owning it in this storyline so far as she came to the aid of the two ponies who are ususally brave, but due to tradegy they aren't so strong as they used to. So great job using Fluttershy this way.
Great overall update to the chapter, as like Rainbow Dash, Applejack is a tough pony to get through. With her upset it is a bit understandable for her to lash out like this in a time of grief.
Still, the time for action is now, and the time for true grieving will come later as Fluttershy said.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.
AWWW, that was cute and honest of Pinkie to do, it's one thing leaving the grown ups like this, but it's a whole new situation when it comes to kids and babies.
I must say I too agree with Pinkie's methods. Lets just hope that Twilight and the others will agree with her.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.
Haaa, totally forgot to leave my usual comments after chapter postings.
Whoops!
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..I don't get it
The pointer-outer of English errors has arrived. Found two:
"lashing out because your hurt."
"I'm... I'm see what's happened"
"party cannon, Pinkie?"
'he "secured the area", Pinkie' - comma-quote placement may or may not be an error, depending on whether you prefer American style or British style punctuation.
"There was months old rotten cakes on the floor, upturned table and chairs." - use "were" because plural things follow, and you need either an article before "upturned" or to pluralize "table". (I probably don't have to explain everything--you would have caught both if I had just pointed out that the sentence was wrong, right?)
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But now they're going back to Zecora's to drop off the babies. And they were planning to meet back at Zecora's in an hour at the end of Chapter 2 anyway. So unless the Elements are capable of remote action, it would have been safer to leave them with Zecora so that there would be no chance of them getting stolen, assuming the ponies at Zecora's are trustworthy (and nopony said that they couldn't trust Zecora to keep the Elements safe).
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Thanks unofficial, post-publishing editor!
Laughed my ass of at "I'm... I'm see what's happened"
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You're assuming Zecora's not coming with them to battle it out at Canterlot?
Thanks again for the typos; I eventually notice them way later on, and always wonder why nopony pointed it out to me
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No, they're going back to Zecora's before heading to Canterlot, right?
In chapter 2:
"Alright everypony, let's fan out. Let's meet back here in an hour maximum. Then we'll regroup, distribute supplies, and head for Canterlot."
So they could leave the Elements at Zecora's while they do the supply-getting, return there, get the Elements, distribute supplies, and then go to Canterlot.
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Oh I see what you mean. Yeah, they could have done that, but they didn't.
I thought you meant leaving them behind when they go to Canterlot.
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So why didn't they?
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What does it matter? I guess it didn't occur to them.
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It doesn't matter too much I guess. I just found their decision strange.
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Fair enough. They'll all be together again soon. For a while that is.
oh ya you take that you damn changelings. i really hope Trixie and flim will be okay in the end
Yeah, I saw that coming when he pronunced his SSSSS!!!
Nice update and it would be interesting to see what happens next now that Rainbow and Twilight realize the danger they're in.
Nice update, but while I know that it was wise for them to leave Apple bloom and the Twins in the safety of Zecora's hut with food and supplies, surely they would at least left a few defensive spells just in case the Changlings do figure out a way into the forest, right ?
Nice update and interesting team, it's going to be a fun ride to Canterlot. I can't wait to see what happens next in this storyline of yours. So please do keep up the good work.
"canon", twice.
These changelings are sneaky!
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You can't beat the magic of the forest; if Twilight felt there was any chance of the changelings finding a way in, she'd have done something like that, yes.
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That double "n" just refuses to get in there
Oh, poo. When you say 'cliffhanger', you really mean it, don'tcha?
Well, that was to be expected. You said it yourself, a character is only dead when you see it happen with your own eyes. That's also the reason I think
Scootaloo is still alive somewhere.
yes yes yes i knew it, i knew Blinkie couldn't be dead :D
1481596 aww you just gave me hope for
I hate to break it to you, but as the author, I can tell you that Scootaloo isn't coming back. While her death was off scene, Apple Bloom confirmed that the fall had killed her. The rule doesn't always apply.
My version of Blinkie is just too awesome of a character to kill off—I love her!
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Adrenaline can do strange things for a human or pony body. In what your body thinks are your last moments it's still able to perform a few impossible feats. Like flying with a body that's not made for it, or at least slowing down enough to survive.1481671
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! That's really sad :applecry
And NOW AJ's going to lose it....
I have to say I didn't see that ending coming for this chapter as this storyline is gettting tragic by the chapter.
Also the girls are now down one element of harmony as only a miracle can truly save them all now.
Do keep up the good work upon such an exciting and emotional storyline like this one, as I found it a great enjoyment seeing it being told from Applejack's POV.