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Dusk Stalker


A fan of DMC for 10 years and somehow a writer(Im a meh writer in my opinion) it appears lol. hoping to expand into Game Animation. Have to many dreams to live or try(VAing is one, Highly doubt it)

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When Raziel was consumed by the Soul Reaver, his life extinguished before him giving Kain the strength and sight to fight the Elder God, he thought his soul would inhabit his blade forever, But a spirit from an unknown realm gives him the chance to have another life.

But it seems Raziel isn't the only one from the four planes alone in this world....How will Equestria handle the Wraith? What is the other beings plan?


I was going to put Human but since Raziel is technically dead and isn't human...then yea. And for those bronies that Played Soul Reaver this is after the events of Legacy of Kain: Defiance.

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Comments ( 44 )

give thumb up can only guess who you will add more,

ooh i vote un possesed turel in the mutated vampire form he would really fit like a giant bat in equestria hmm

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Now that would be a sight to add to the story. Then again their is Janos Audron:
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Possessed again by the Hylden Lord or not even possessed who knows.

Well, this is turning to be interesting, and a Soulreaver crossover no less :pinkiesmile:
But there is a defining mistake here,
(Raziel still had the Wraith blade up, its dull spectral green glow lighting up the whole clearing.) the Wraith blade glows green in the spectral realm and by default, blue in the material realm or different color depending on what it's been imbued with:
Red/Fire
White/Air
etc.
I think the last imbued form in Defiance was Gold/Whitish for Holy or Light element (I also havent played the games in years, its a classic though :pinkiehappy:)
And also, what you named "Kain's Headquarters" is Actually "Sanctuary of the clans" and Kain's throne is among the "Pillars of Nosgoth"
(Just some tidbits, dunno if you made that by choice or missed detail :raritywink:)

EDIT: D'oh, looks like i gave a bit of false info there, the one Kain has his throne on is "The" pillar of Balance and collectively Pillars of Nosgoth.

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Thanks for the info :twilightsmile:
Damn it really has been awhile since we played it.(Fix Raziels Reaver to, think Spirit the last Reaver he gets that is imbued).

And i will go back to fix it:)

The last Reaver is in fact, as Dusk said, the Spirit Reaver, upon consuming Ariel's purified soul, when activating the Spirit Forge.
The other reavers were, in order of acquisition: Light, Dark, Air, Fire, Water, Earth (at least in Defiance).
I was long waiting to write such a fic, but you seem to have raced me to it. And it's quite good, nonetheless.
It would be a nice thing to also rememorize some of the events in the older soul reaver games, such as the a part recalling the Sarafan/Vampire brothers in arms he murdered (Melchiah, Zephon, Duma, etc), and adding more on the background for those who don't know would also be advisable.
I will keep an eye on it, to see how it develops.
Edit: The only flaw to this is that the Spectral variant of the Reaver is in fact Raziel's entwined soul. The cycle begins in Defiance, upon Raziel being consumed by the sword to defeat the Elder God. In Soul Reaver1, Raziel. newly a wraith and blinded by rage, first fights Kain in the Sanctuary, and he is overpowered by him shortly. Upon trying to strike Raziel down with the complete Reaver, the material variant shatters upon hitting Raziel, releasing the Spectral variant in the spirit realm, where Raziel's two souls (Wraith and blade) bind together. The cycle is then reiterated by the paradox created along the three games.

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Thank you :) and sorry if I beat ya to it though :(

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Eh, I was going to make more of a remake to the original, using ponified chars and a bit of an altered story. But yours works to. :pinkiehappy:

Can't wait to hear more man, keep up the work :twilightsmile:

Promising, if fairly flawed...

The grammar hiccups here and there, the aforementioned errors that the first two commenters have already stated, and Zecora not speaking ENTIRELY in rhyme are a few of my gripes with this fic...

As a fan of Legacy of Kain, this is interesting (as i've always found "what if" stories post "Raziel enters the reaver at the end of Defiance" to be rather interesting), and i wouldn't mind coming back for more in the future, but some of these errors of technicality and characterization MUST be addressed before that.

That's my two cents... Keep at it.

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Aint a genius with Zecora, I try my best.

As for grammar, I am little jumbled doing two fics at a time and gets very confusing lol and I do try the best I can at it.

thank you for the tips :twilightsmile:

My reaction when my PS 2 or 3 couldn't play em:
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And it doesn't help that I finished late at night...swear I gotta get out of that rutt lol:)

Lol this is good you're doing alright with Raziel :) Defiance was full of Irony lol can't wait for update u got a reader

Nice to see an update at last from you. Shifting between realms at will? Curious choice, though i would've loved to see Corpse possession in action.
Phase-through demonstrated :yay:
Now make him show the rest; Wall climbing, swimming and 'spinning' stuff with a telekinetic grip :ajsmug:
A few grammar errors here and there, aside from that, definitely improved.

Will be waiting for more.

good chapter though i would like to see Raziel scare the living shit out of somepony lol:pinkiehappy:

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OMG! I almost SQUEALED when I saw the image!

I can't even describe my reaction at seeing the image of a game I used to love so much...

Can you please update it? :applecry:

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I am trying man I am currently in a massive writers block, and am trying to update my DMC story to
But I am trying as best I can.

Dude!! You fucking wrote a Soul Reaver Fic!?!?!

OH GOD THE NOSTALGIA!!
Now I gotta brush up on my Legacy of Kain history :pinkiegasp:

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rainbow dash is going to herself look like an idiot isn't she?:facehoof:

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If she brings up his wings, possibly...but not certain yet.

Nobody seems to comment on the fact that Raziel has no skin.

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They assume its his skin, we know that is was burned off in the Lake of the Dead:)
Least they didn't see he has no lower jaw....yet. :pinkiecrazy:

please continue update this story is really getting intresting!:pinkiesmile::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

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I am seperated with both my DMC and Lok one...
But am trying.:twilightsmile:

Yay for Corpse Possession :yay:
Nice to see an update from you, do keep up the good work :raritywink:

But i see you once again used the name Pillars of Balance, so i'm guessing you must've missed the correction i made in my earlier comment :twilightblush:
So instead of me whining about it, let me direct you here. Pillars of Nosgoth

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I'll go change it thanks:)
Sucks I get it confused since Kain isn't in here.

Savior of Nosgoth, Scion of Balance Etc lol.

good chapter. even if it is small. best to come in small dossis. you know?

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Nyaaaaaaaaaa!
*charges in, grabs Raziel, and runs away, fangirl sqweeing all the way*

1501002 I concur with your previously stated actions:moustache:... :yay:

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I leave you two fangirls with this :) :

Hello, me again. Listen, i'm not sure if you know this, but the name of the Hylden Lord is "Hash'Ak'Gik". Just thought i'd point that out. I'm planning on reading the next few chapters that you have presented... mostly because i have not much else to do.

Also, i've be dabbling a little bit in my own LoK crossover with FIM (so far, starring Janos Audron), and i would like any and all critical input on it, whether it's positive or negative. Shoot me a message if you want to know the name of the fic... or just ask via reply. Don't matter really. :3

yeah, i think i'm done. It's still too choppy, the dialogue is a fair bit jumbled, and Raziel seems a little bit too "shoe horned in" than being a part of the story (even though you are trying to make him part of the story). I still see alot of grammar and formatting issues (get an editor, dude), and Raziel is just a little bit OOC (I should know, i've done the same thing when writing my first crossover LoK fic way back when... it was terribad too...), and not when the situation calls for it.

Also, getting back to one of the major concerns... the dialogue. You have to understand that there was a "Shakespearian" quality to the dialogue in previous games, where it was deliciously melodramatic, with hints of dry wit, and topped off with sprinkles of metaphorical notions for the weightier topics that resided in the game. Not just that, though, but the vocabulary is much more than just any normal banter. The conversation between Raziel and Mobius below is a great example of all of this.

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You also forget the opening Soul Reaver 2 when Kain and Raziel are conversing in the Chronoplast, When Raziel was conversing with his past self, and when he was conversing The Hylden Lord a couple times, but thats a few.

And yes I am looking for an editor(Thats a no brainer:P) but when....well in the words of Kain:

" Is there a crack in your omniscience Moebius?"

But who knows, I am looking.

This is a pretty good crossover keep up with it,it's interesting.

Too bad that you can not continue writing :ajsleepy:

I like your story really

Sir if you're still there, I have a question, are you having trouble writing this fic?

Well, I'll tell you that you were one of my inspirations to write this fic (sorry for the shameless self promotion) becuase it saddens me to see this story not being updated.

you I feel that the Legacy of Kain dose have a complete ending if you think of blood omen 2 as the end of the series and every then from soul reaver 1 2 and Defiance as pequles

I'll admit, I don't know much about Legacy of Kain Soul Reaver. So I decided to read this fanfic and judge Raziel's personality/attitude based on how he interacts with the ponies.

He seems like a pretty chill dude, even after getting attacked from behind by Twilight Sparkle:twilightblush:

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