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6:28 am. The blinding light appeared near Magic Power Plant in Drakhia. The distance of 30 km. became separated, danger zone. Soldiers which returned from expeditions were saying about mutants and anomalies.Two years after the disaster bandits,exsoldiers,anarchists and adventurers are coming to the Zone searching for money or escaping the law. One of the newcomers is Spike. Forced to leave wife in Ponyville, he's searching for Celestia's troopers lost in the Zone. He discovers something what can destroy whole equestria.

Based on S.T.A.L.K.E.R games.
I do not own "STALKER" series.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

Very much references to game, many references to show. Good idea, but weak.

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Thanks for commenting.:pinkiehappy: It's my first ever fic so I know it's quite weak but will try to make it better:rainbowdetermined2:
I need critisism.
And sorry for grammar. English is not my familiar language.

Prologue confuses me. Celestia seems very out of character. I've just about grasped that there's been a time jump from the actual episodes and there's been a war.

I like.

Rainbow Dash and Spike shipped together? Instant upvote. :moustache:

However, it is indeed rushed (less than 1k words per chapter!) and there's too many grammatical errors to count :rainbowlaugh:

Sorry it took me so long to get round to reading this. My Read Later list is now nearing 150 :raritycry:

Good story. Update soon.

1926446 ill read this tomorrow, but whois his wife before i start

Not bad at all spikbo nice i looking forvaid to read more from your stories

How do you 'safe' something?

Hey is this story like cancelled

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