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Mr V
In case you couldn't tell, my works are often written to fill specific ... niches. I expect you will enjoy a unique and novel experience.
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Pretty enjoyable overall, thought I did have a very severe case of brain-lock at the farts bit.
Me reading:
>Cruisin' along, good story so far.
>"farts all over me"
>*record scratch* wait, wat?
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That's exactly what I was going for.
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Mission Accomplished my good sir.
But yeah, good story and I definitely enjoyed it.
Though the use of "hands" had me thinking for a bit that "you" were a human for a while until "you" used your beak.
Maybe talons or something?
I would have gone for explicit
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Nah, Mature yes/Explicit no.
coo shit
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both
I love you Mr. V!
).
I really do.
Thank you for making this awesomely hilarious and pretty darned hot story about my one and only waifu... Gilda Grimfeathers.
You made it sound just enough like her male counterpart could be human without him actually being one, letting the reader relate easier without falling into the same problems that HiE clopfics way too often do.
Your rendition of Gilda is exactly how I imagined she'd be outside of the episode, and the guy has a great sense of humor (dat 90's reference
Right after Gilda turned up the stereo I just could help but say to myself "Shit just got real...".
This is truly nothing short of a masterpiece!
So again, from the bottom of my Gilda-loving heart... THANK YOU!
I was pretty confused about whether I was supposed to be human, a pony, or goodness knows what else.
But, anyways, it's pretty nice. Glad to see that you (or I suppose I should say I) made those soft, snugly feathers all nice, warm, and sticky.
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Gotta ask, though;
Why?
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Well, it's like this
I always try to make the reader experience -something- which mirrors the experiences of the characters in the story.
Gilda is bemused - the reader is bemused.
My application of technique was successful.
325082 And this is how you went with doing it? You're taking the piss, right? Your only reason to include that scene was to cause the reader a surprised\disgusted frown? That's not classy to even griffon standards. Great way to snap one out of immersion and make him yell "flatulence isn't something anyone wants to experience in literature, you twat", though. TL;DR please give a better excuse for such a tasteless and unnecessary scene if possible if you wanna justify keeping it around. People would probably be rating this story that much higher with said scene's absence, I'm just saying.
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Well, I disagree.
I understood perfectly well the risks I was taking, and I'm quite satisfied with the story.
The scene went exactly the way I wanted it to and conveyed what I wanted about the mood, the characters, and their relationship.
I guess you'll just have to excuse me for being tasteless in my fetish fanfiction.
Some people like farts, you know.
326321 I got nothing to add, then.
Sexo duro y doloroso... esto me trae recuerdos dolorosos que aun persisten en mis cicatrizes...
Excelente historia hermano!
That was hilarious. I love the characterization of their rednickish, messy house--it's exactly how I could see Gilda living. It's admirable that you can show us the love that can bloom in such a classless environment.
That was sweet and funny, and I appreciated you avoiding the typical redemption arc that Gilda gets put through. Excellent work, thank you for writing!
This dude is such a G!
I can't remember what I ment by that last comment.