I've lived my life to it's extent. I've run my course. My friends are now gone, and I am ready to join them. But, before I leave and begin an entire new journey, there is a single lesson I must share. I spent my entire life researching friendship, but I never stopped to ask: What is friendship?
Wow, what a touching story.
Have a mustache
Quite lovely. I think you used the word "leaf" exactly two times too many in the first part, and "conscious" should be "conscience", but apart from that I found nothing wrong, and especially enjoyed the Twiluna in there![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
an excellent idea and well written. i would rather you did not tell us all the friendship lessons in the beginning but it did not noticeable detract from the story. Good Work like fav mustache![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
1427001>>1427013>>1427418 Thanks guys!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Good story mate![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
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just like My Little Dashie you nuked my feels
have some 'staches
i normally don't read short stories glad i gave this one a chance off to dig through the rest of your writing and favorites.![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
That ending. Know what it calls for? A sequel.
Definatly a great story I the only short stories I have read are one that were recommended but I am very glad that I read this it was very touching I felt that I agree with veonetric it should definatly have a sequel I am personally suprized that I didn't expect it to say that friendship is magic, please write more this was a fantastic story, very touching.
Damn, this story has the feels....
I agree with the others, a sequel is definitely called for!
1432172>>1432430>>1432469>>1432684>>1433160 Thanks guys! Glad you liked it.
And by the way, I am planning on doing a sequel. It might be another one-shot, but I also have an idea for a multi-parter sequel. ![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
1432726 I've never been featured, so it would be pretty cool to see this story featured
1433595 I usually don't like stories like this where Twilight or any of the others die, but this one turned out to be good. I feel bad for Luna![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
That was very good, I'm pleased i took the time to read this.
I liked the last like you added-
- It was very well placed...
Just one correction...
That should be " You're ".
1433962 Glad you liked it!![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
As for the correction, excuse me as I go slam my face into a wall repeatedly.
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Haha, the face wall, when a hoof ain't good enough![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
1427013 Does it sound less repetitive with the leaves now in the first paragraph?
Yes a sequel sounds great please make it more than a one shot though I believe that it would be much better with more int it your stories are fantastic so you should defiantly write more.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
1435506![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Yeah!
1436286![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
This was really pretty, although the Twiluna shipping is a bit odd.... Still, nice story, though it could use a bit more feels maybe. Overall, very nice.![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
Sequel wanted. Who is the father? And what is dis prophecy?
1460411 Sequel being written soon![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Maybe....
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You better Pinkie Promise on dat sequel!
1465161![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
1465185![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
1465199![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
Wow... this is some seriously deep stuff here. Nice work!
That was a nice touch. Can't wait for the sequel!
1466311 Glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for the favorite and watch!
1465202![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
1468391![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1472063![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
1477860![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
1477874![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
1477881![:trixieshiftleft:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftleft.png)
maybe a little to thick on the friendship stuff... but beside that it was okay :3
1505536 Glad you liked it![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
That was really sad...But super well thought out. I loved the analogy with the tree and leaves... Really really good.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
I found a typo, by the way:
(Much.)![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Anyway, awesome job with this story!
1521676 Thanks! I'll get to fixing that right away.
I am cryign a little.![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
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so deep... please gimme a sequal..... *breaks down into a ball of an emotional mess* *you dun good... you dun good*
2065309 Thanks!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
The sequel might/will come...eventually...
1466348 y u so good at writing?! Are you going to make a sequel?
2544413 Maybe eventually. Not sure.
2545429 You have GOT to make a sequel. You have earned a watch, good sir.
Now you will never lose track of the time.
With the quality of this you really should make a sequel. Good luck if you decide to and an excellent story here.![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
This barely made it into my favourites list.
Overall a good story, but lacks depth, any real emotional impact.
I smell a sequal.