• Member Since 15th Jul, 2012
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BronyDerp117


A dood from the west. I'm not a brony anymore and I haven't posted here since I was teenager, but I hope you enjoy the few stories I managed to finish back then!

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After successfully bringing up the water to Cloudsdale, Fluttershy has found a new faith in herself. She asked Rainbow Dash to teach her how to fly better, faster, and Rainbow happily accepted. But after one lesson while out in a fierce thunderstorm, Rainbow will forever have to live with her own failure.

Cover art by cloudseviin

Reading of this story by Hero541: Reading

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

I'm a complete asshole for writing this. I'm sorry.

damn you.

made me hopeful.then killed it.

fortunetly

I HAZ NO FEALZ

This story made me cry over and over, besides Fluttershy dying it is a great story and I can't wait to see where it goes

The worse kind of Tragic accident unable to say any final words.:raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry::fluttershbad::applecry: personal experience is painful.

1618142 dafuq yeah i killed my best friend so lets marry applejack?

1626205 They got together years after her death. The story says the present day is fifteen years after her death.
1625078 XD
1625285 Glad you enjoyed! :twilightsmile: Though this is a one-shot.
1625779 :fluttershysad:

It may be short, it may jump around, and I may have written stuff like this before, but damn...

Right in the feels...:fluttershysad::heart:

This is a great little gem floating on the top of the turgid water or Sturgeon's Law, you should feel proud, you made us have an emotional attachment to something so short, good work!:twilightsmile::ajsmug:

:fluttershysad:
At least I let Flutters live...
*sniff* Damn you.
:fluttercry: I... just give me a moment...

1631310 I'm sorry! :fluttercry:
I can't even use the emoticon without feeling like an asshole. :applecry:

1644478 Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

I have lost some one very close to me and I never got to say goodbye, and it haunts me every day but....THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY!:fluttercry:

I think i'll go visit my moms grave and tell her im sorry.:ajsleepy:

1658539 I'm so sorry for your loss. It's never easy when you lose someone you love. I wish you the best, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

1618142
I DIDN'T GET OVER IT!!!!!!!!!! EVER SINCE I READ THIS I HAVEN'T STOPPED CRYING! I HAVE BEEN CRYING FOR LITERALLY AN HOUR AND A HALF!!! BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I WANT MORE THAN SOMETHING TO MAKE ME STOP CRYING?(OBVIOUSLY NOT GOING TO HAPPEN) I WANT A PREQUEL WITH AT LEAST 4,000-5,000 WORDS! I WANT HER FUNERAL, EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENED DURING THE TIME RAINBOW WAS IN A COMA, AND I WANT TO KNOW IF RAINBOW IS A LESBIAN WITH AJ OR WHAT!!! But for now I will continue to cry! :ajsleepy::applecry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::raritydespair::raritycry:

1716050
Sorry.... I find it awkward that I''m still crying, I'm a guy, and I'm not gay.....

1716136 I don't even want to ask what happened when/if you read My Little Dashie...

I'm pretty sure this is what might have happened if fluttershy didn't die.i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/172/470/55558+-+DAAAAWWWW+applejack+artist+cartoonlion+big_macintosh+cute+fluttershy+foals+incoming_diabetus+mane_6+pinkie_pie+rainbow_dash+rarity+twilight_sparkle.png and I'm ok with the story the way it is, I'm just trying to make my self stop whelping/crying.

Hey, I stopped! :pinkiesmile:

1716050
Look I apologize for getting so emotional but this sh*t right here is depressing. I cried as much as when I read My Little Dashie, but then again a year later the creator made a sequel that ended sad but a lot happier! Good job on this story BronyDerp117, there's not many things in the universe that make me cry like this did! You have made the top 2 list! :rainbowkiss:

1716217 Sequel? A non-fan sequel?! WHAT?!!!
Glad you liked it :twilightsmile:

Want to read the sequel? I have the link.:twilightblush:

I forgot to mention he didn't write it, he just rated it his #1 favorite of all time story on FIMFiction.net. Link below!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5284/My-Little-Dashie%3A-A-sequel

1618142 you are one of the absolute best writers I have ever read from. I have read almost all of your stories.....and DAMN! You're a author with real talent.

2539701 Again, I can't tell you how much that means to me. It's comments like that that really make me love writing. And I'm only fifteen, too! Reading stuff like that... Just thanks, man, really. :twilightsmile:

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