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Congrats on the 200k my dude, no idea bout spell names.
Keep on writing
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Thanks. :}
Hmm, maybe Imaginary Journal? I don't know if it fits but eh
Awesome chapter, also yay 200k.
And I can't be the only one trying to will sun butt to give shade a hug
Congrats on 200k
Secret Script?
Maybe some combination of life, history, or book in latin or similar.
Like a Warhammer 40000 imperium name
wary weary is being tired, wary is cautious.
And grats on the milestone. You're definitely now in the upper echelon for story writers here for getting that far.
No idea what to call illusion pages. Figment parchment? I dunno.
Looking forward to more of this tho, and keep doing what you're doing.
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Thank you. :]
Could just call it a pocketbook spell. Bit on the nose but hey it's an entire book you can fit in your pocket. :P
Couldn’t help but think of this.
This side up.
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Got to be one of my favourite, moments from this season.
Grian is like
I cast "OBLITERATE" !!!
Well done, you writing machine!!
👍👍
Ideas for the Illusion name:
1. DATABASE-V: Divine Archive To Achieve Basic and Advanced Security for Ease of Viewing
2. Data Crystal
3. Crystal Disc (CD)
4. THUM (Drive): Thaumaturgical storeHouse for Unknown Material
5. Magic Book
6. CADANCE: Crystal Archive Data And Monitor for Seeing Everything (the N was hard to find something for)
They’re not great ideas Sorry.
It’s interesting that Celestia has encountered multiple ponies who regularly do secret work for her. I imagine those jobs are more on the Intelligence side of things and not as often a civilian volunteer like Shade.
Since so few ponies achieve the heights of mastery in Runic Casting, there’s a chance Shade will have to be nationally recognized by the magic community for the achievement -especially since he notified Celestia about it in pony. There’s probably titles for such things like with Archmages on the unicorn side of magic: licensing and registration, offices, plaques, special clothes like Starswirl had with the stars and bells, action figures… Maybe that’s for if he gets beyond Journeypony?
Wonder if he can eventually edit his journal to have a whitelist. Then he can, in the event of his death, have specific ponies that could activate and read the journal. As messed up as it is, he could key himself in to a dead man's switch to activate the whitelist, or he could key it to Entropy since she probably knows who to trust.
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Ya that's about right. XD
Another nice chapter. The conversation felt a bit short but if they were busy reading reports and playing chess I guess it makes sense.
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Ya it felt a bit short but I couldn't find a good way to drag it out and the chapter was getting long.
A name for the illusion pages?
"Phantasmal Display or Phantasm Display"
"Fictional Folio"
"Illusionary Leaf"
"Visionary's Verse."
"Wispy Words"
"Ecto-Expressions"
Just a few that came off the top of my head and hope they help. Been enjoying the story.
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Thanks, and I'm happy your enjoying it. :}
The ghost script.
The invisible journal.
Winter’s logbook.
Recordable projection.
Ok some of these kinda suck.. I really like ghost script though. Also like one I saw in another comment: Crystal display (CD)
Congrats on achieving the milestone. I’ll still be here reading when you hit a million.
hmmm
if i were you, i would go with "The Diary"
he brushed that off pretty quick without really inspecting it... I feel like this part could've used a few more details. who's trying to marry Shade?
is some rich pony trying to marry off their daughter?- WAIT, MAYBE THEY ASSUME HE'S A MARE AND IS TRYING TO MARRY OFF THEIR SON! BECAUSE IT'S AN RGRE! they don't even know who Shade is, so it's probably somepony too old for Shade...
I get that this isn't mainly a romcom or anything, but you can't go wrong with sprinkling in some silly pony romance here and there, even if it doesn't lead to anything.
maybe you should do cutaways and show ponies reacting to getting their invitations turned down and marriage proposals rejected by this mysterious inventor pony, might make the world feel a bit more fleshed out.
I imagine most nobles wouldn't react well to having their invitations rejected for any reason. it might be interesting to see how the average pony perceives Shade's existence, and watch them try to figure out just what kind of pony "Vail" is.
a rejected marriage proposal could make ponies assume he's already married. a rejected invites could make them think he's from an even more important family. et cetera
it'd be hilarious to watch an entire room full of nobles try and fail to figure Shade out. there's a lot you could do with world building.
also congrats on 200K!
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Has she brought up asking him to become her student or at least meet Twilight? I can’t remember at this point and it feels like something she would try
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No, but I've been thinking about just that as we haven't see Twilight for a while now.
Ghost Note may be a good name or Phantom Files.
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my headcanon for this is that Celestia only has one "faithful student" at a time. (why she hasn't talked to Shade about it)
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she's got no reason to bring her up
unless...
how hard do you think Celestia tried to have twilight make some friends at this point in the story?
maybe the most realistic way to go about it is to have Celestia "coincidentally" invite Shade for a meeting while she's with Twilight. in an effort to get her to socialize with a pony her own age, only for Twilight to completely ignore Shade's presence the whole time.
and Shade, would probably be totally fine with that, given how he reacts to Shining.
that's how i imagine a meeting with Twilight would go
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I mean....given how full or curiosity and stuff twi used in interacting with shade last then without her actual mom around her at the time she might tackle him for more involved on certain things
Goosebumps
This one was actually right before
It's supposed to be Sunday*
I don't need to keep others out if there is nothing to access. The writing will be in English as a safeguard but the gem will also have a self-destruct to destroy itself if accessed by somepony that's not me. This is the best solution I could come up with that couldn't be easily defeated.
I hope he has an Extra Copy or a way so he won't be forgotten through time....
"You are fairly wealthy, and the recent inventions have been a massive success, especially the silence spell for foals." I look back down at the marriage contract and don't bother responding to it, that has got to be the oddest thing I've ever been sent before.
OH HECK NO!!!!
BURN IT 🔥!!!!!
Hello if you're reading this then something has either gone horribly wrong, or I'm dead. My name is Shade Evergreen, and my name is also Kevin Leery Forester. And I have a story to tell you, my story, and I'm so sorry.
One your Done Writing your Fanfiction to have a Epic Ending of the Story, I'm curious how other Creatures will react to his Story and Thoughts.
But that's Futura you Problem not Current you, plus I'm taking my Sweet Time Reading this Book.
Good.