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buying some fish, potatoes, carrots, some spices and a loaf of bread
potatoes and carrots
potatoes and carrots
before bringing the pot
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Thank you. :D
To many run on sentences. It seems like you don't know pacing either. Advice get an editor and rewrite everything.
Thanks for the update!
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First thank you for the spelling checks. Second thank you for the advice and yes his cutie mark means something but I'll keep that to myself for now. And finally and most importantly thank you for being polite.
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Shelves*
I missed that the first time I read this. That’s my birthday! What an auspicious day for the Entropy’s beginning.
The spell you're using at the start is checking for physical sex, not gender. While they are used interchangeably they have very different meanings.
And even then, sex is not just the XY/XX chromosomes. It is far more complicated at a generic and hormonal level.
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For the sake and sanity of the story it's to check if the pony is male or female.
Sex=gender in the mlp universe as gender/sex being equated to being more complicated than male or female is a rather modern human thinking thats only really used in the scientific community when writing about said topic as it's irrelevant outside of said subject.
What you mentioned is the equivalent of a 1st grade science teacher saying that theirs 3 states of matter and you shout out "nuh uh plasma is number 4" and then start rattling off about sublimination.
Now that i think about it, where is the Canterlot's
classic Classism????
This would have been an incredible opportunity to have him experiment with healing magic on a minor wound
Is he gonna make a Bird Bed next to his Pony Bed?
So she won't get Mad at his Adopted Dad?