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Cute ... something is going to happen ... it has been too long. The rules of storytelling demand that something must go to hell sooner than later. I got nothing else to add rn
except that you should 100% give him a cool battle/war magi robe11873408
Robe? Maybe.
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Thanks.
"I reapply new glue to a book cover and start delicately rebidnding the book."
I doubt he's making an increasing amount of pay at auction for this book
"My son sent me a letter, he and his wife are having another foual."
The process certainly is when it comes to deliver. Be thankful it's not a fowl, Blaz, then you'd have many questions.
"You're full of layers and smaell awful."
Are onions awfully small, Blaz? Be thankful he's not an ogre sized onion.
Don't have much to comment on for the story itself this chapter, seems to be building up to something soon tho judging by the lull.
looking forward to more.
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Thank you.
Huh, it seems not only I am expecting something to come crashing down.
rebinding
foal
smell
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Thank you.
I don't know is this is just fan knowledge or actual cannon. But I thought that if you over feed a changeling they turn into a queen. So if the changelings had infinite love they could all turn into queens, which would either A. Turn them into a super power, or B. Cause a massive civil war for control.
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I don't think it's canon but might be implied in some way. Honestly trying to remember the entire show is hard.
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already beat you to the punch I'm afraid.
He could always go the capitalist route and sell the love for bits. That way lings have to get jobs.
Just wanted to say that your writing quality seems to be getting better, great job! The story was interesting enough earlier to survive the errors and run on sentences, now it is on a voice/style that is much easier to read. Thank you for the effort, it isn't easy and keep it up!
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Thank you for the complement.
Having some wards or concussive armaments stocked with sadness or melancholy could be an effective non-lethal deterrent against an aggressive emotivore… Idk. Maybe Celestia could think about that? Might be worth a written proposal without the runework to gauge her response as well as love -or other positive emotions- to supplement for potential negotiation leverage? Wards could be hidden in the cobblestones or masonry waiting for an activation code.
Oil paints are derived by grinding minerals into powder. Mixing and layering them can create different chemical properties that react with light in slightly different ways. What kind of blue is Daisy looking for?
I don’t know what the recruiting age is for the Guard, but I expect some talent scouts to get some tips about Shade. Although, I’m not sure if that would be his preferred line of work.
Are emotional affinities similar to the magical affinities or are they a separate category? Would Shade have to determine if he has one similar to his life and spacial affinities or would the emotional affinity have been notified by his previous affinity test?
Bottling up emotions can have vast rewards and complications down the line. Especially if a method is found to change one emotion to another, even at a fractional loss: converting 40 cups of useless rage into even a single cup of useful love is beneficial to show the changelings that the Queen's ways are not the only ways... But that ties back in to getting defectors in the changeling ranks and/or informants
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Whoops, I should have checked the comments first!
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Think it's just fan IIRC i've only read one fic where one was converted that way.
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They are a separate category, but the spell Shade used to would have told him if he had any other affinities.
Decided to come back and check on this randomly, and I gotta say, I'm impressed with how quickly you've improved the sentence structure. A small look around shows that while you've probably, definitely put commas* where periods should be, some commas that should be commas a periods.
Small issue of word flow aside... Well done, you'll eventually get the flow of when to use commas and periods with time, until then, incredible work.
Did we already forget how to solve this issue cause I am pretty sure it is part of canon?
Make condiments for changeling meals?
Buffs with happiness and curses with sadness?