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Oof, this is rough. Not just spelling, but also punctuation and capitalization. Even if you don't have an editor, going back over your story and bringing it up to par would do wonders for readability.
Thanks for the updates!
Into my library you go!
ch1
excited
actually
loan
spell
excited
excited
career
every
get a
own
decided
ch2
Pick one "do the same effect", "create the same effect"
quarter
runes
ch3
*sensible chuckle*
clock
restaurants
Is it a batpony or a unicorn or is this a story with weird hybrids? Because that's practically an alicorn well not full power but still.
sugar
plates
put
metal
dial
month
ch4
crate?
either
ch5
split
plate
plate
sweet
thedraining
dims
motes
desk
claim (there's a spongebob meme here somewhere)
ch6
stare
you know not to do that
range
things
oh
it
hide
unknown
follow
Shade you fool, this is the point of get poweful quick scheme! Enter the equilibrium - healing loop and ascend to new heights!
Ponyville this is a town, town names are capitalized so is Canterlot.
EDIT: I misspelled Ponyville myself lmao.
Finally, dialogue!
Was MC’s runic cutie mark ever reported to the local authorities? Or is there no such system in place currently? I’m wondering how this guy is learning and practicing all of this and nopony is noticing at all.
Did MC notice if Twilight or Shining had their marks?
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Well, at least you didn’t say Ponyoville.
so far you get a 5/10. It is very rough but completely averagely understandable. The somewhat interesting idea saves it from a 4 which is Below Average.