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Shade needs some more practice talking to ponies, maybe.
If they end up giving him some protein during his younger years now, will he be a little more fit and or act a little less girly during canon time?
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Maybe? I haven't decided if I should go that rout yet, plus I'm of the opinion that they probably fed him meat anyway.
Thank you for posting on a holiday (for some) . I enjoyed it as always, but am eagerly awaiting the next big plot point.
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And thank you for reading.
This was definitely more entertaining than the past few chapters because I was starting to get bored. In terms of plot.
I don't get why she was so offended by that, Is it not common knowledge?
And why is she so aggressive? She knows him but all of a sudden, when he asked a simple question, She became extremely suspicious 😂😂 like he's going to kidnap her daughter or something.
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Well first they've met three times and only had a few conversations, and subspecies may be a common thing to us but not to them.
Thanks for reading.
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I get that but there's nothing offensive About subspecies, I'm not trying to be hateful but I don't get the reason why this is a part of the plot.
Even though they had minimal conversation it had nothing in them too conveyed distrust between them.
That's my only criticism, but I like this story Anyways so i'm gonna let this slide.
Thanks for the update!
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I'm sorry my last message didn't make my reasoning clear, that's on me.
my reasoning went like this, If all ponies share an ancestor then some of them like unicorns and pegasi are subspecies, then calling them a subspecies could come off as an insult to them, especially if they don't know what the word actually means.
This combined with Velvets implied bad experiences in the past made her have a bad reaction when it was said to her.
I added something to the chapter to better illustrate this.
Sorry about the confusion and have a nice day.
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Understandable have a good night/day
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That's my bad, apparently during editing I forgot a single / on a line of text, i fixed it.
Thanks for informing me.
Bien capítulo, aunque no entiendo porque Velvet se ofendió tanto, son preguntas muy comunes como para ponerte agresivo.
He's pen pals with the princess right
why not ask the princess for help finding a rune?
and what about taking her out for a fly at night?
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exactly
I hope Twilight's Family will treat Spike as an Adopted Son, like I see Twilight and Shining Armor having a Siblings relationship
It really sucks that they don't show any good Siblings relationship with Spike, like come on it would be adorable 😢 literally only one episode of them having a Siblings Rivalry
HECK!
I Want to see Spike's Relationship with his Adopted Parents!!!
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Spike not being treated like a slave for once?
you love to see it