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The only real suggestion I can make is to have the shawdos move. Whether in his head or real, one does not simply ignore or forget one's paranoia.
No ideas for cities to visit or the like, just interested in seeing where your overarching plot is headed.
You have a good day too.
llegara a aparecer cadence o otro personaje relevante, solo para un poco de fanservice?
PD: Buen capitulo por cierto :D
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Tal vez.
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me sirve
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Yes. She is a busy pony so once every two weeks isn't always on the dot, that and it gives me room to very the timing.
Hmm, maybe visit the local market or curio shops for some old books, seeds/plants, or maybe new things for him to find? A while ago I mentioned a metal that behaves like a plant so maybe that. He could also find some souvenirs for his work colleagues and/or Tia.
He could also check local libraries for unique books for inspiration and the like. What else... pastries shops? Some towns have unique pastries only found in local areas.
Also,
Good day to you too.
nice, maybe avalon will invent the missing piece to one of shade's puzzles, or something
I can see Avalon being the first to figure out Shades second identity. With a new prosthetics coming out right after meeting Shade. That or Shining Armor.
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Fair point.
Avalon the Griffon of Runes. Guy might be important in Griffonstone someday soon.
Magic prosthesis eh? Will he develop some someday? Now I'm reminded of an old classic of fimfiction about a human turned pony that was missing several limbs and rediscovered that art.
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Which fic?
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/224216/my-life-as-a-bipedal-quadruped
Let the story flow! Really good chapter too
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Thank you.
Thanks Newdragon for another great chapter. If your thinking of ideas for the New Troten arc of the story I would take the time to world build a bit and use a bit of creative writing to help picture a large pony city and city pony life. You could, for example, make the city out to be a kind of magical 1900's Newyork style city, with magically run streetcars, gas or electric arc streetlights, and busy street traffic with many ponies pulling different carts like multi-hitched pony bus's ect. While equestria has a few technologies, like medicine, which are on par with contemporary technologies a lot of technology is still renaissance/industrial revolution in level and is substituted with magic instead. I think It would be really cool to see a large pony city where these mismatching bits of old tech, magic and new tech are all blended together in such a melting-pot of a major pony metropolis. Thanks again, and good luck with your next chapter.
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Thank you. :}
HECK YEAH A GRIFFON FRIEND!!!
He has his own Personal Dilivery Bird.