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mine not my
Also yay new chapter
Nice story, noticing a lot of little grammar mistakes, ones that can be easily fixed if you ran it through Google docs or word. I was wondering if you would want an editor to clean up the chapters I would be willing to go through an fix them up. Dm me if you're interested, overall great job so far with the story π
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I'm not looking for an editor right now but thank you for offering, and thanks for reading.
Oh is maple a long? Maybe Crissi getting into the city for her future plans?
great chapter!
keep up the work
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Hey BlueDragon, not to nitpicky but from 124 to 233 is an age of 109, not 111. Sorry, but when I saw that I did some quick math in my head to get it before I read what you wrote after the age length. Anyways, great story so far. I really can't wait for the romance to start and getting to the spicy stuff.
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Not a nitpick at all thanks for catching that, and thanks for reading.
Thanks for the update!
In my head when Maple was first introduced I thought she might be a changeling. Donβt know why, especially since finding love in a library job is small pickings, might have been just how she was presented in my head but now it feels like thereβs definitely something with her.
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No problem π never hurts to ask
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Yes she is supposed to be around her mid thirties, and if her grandsire and sire had kids early that would make him old but still possible.
Thanks for reading.
advice
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Love for books maybe? Even then yeah I wouldn't assume that'd amount to much, then again i've seen several fics with changeling set wholly or in part in cafes.
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Thank you.
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Yes but then he'd also need to learn how to cut gems and that can be difficult, so why waste time cutting gems when you can buy them.
To continue bird training⦠maybe make the small shield opaque or less transparent. Then less direct line of sight would be available. After that, have two bubbles and slowly separate them maybe?
What other things could later help the Mane Sixβ¦ will MC try to save Applejackβs parents? The basic healing spell would be helpful. I wonder how the biomancy will be utilizedβ¦
Definitely looking forward for more of Shade!!
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I may use the training idea, if that's fine with you?.
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Yeah! ππ
Shade never stops grinding.
refocus
wheather
necessities
Im gonna go out on a limb and guess that Maple is Chrysalis in disguise. Or at least a changeling.
;)
Too many punctuation errors to point out in this chapter.
I'll be holding you on that.
Weather.
Just wondering, do you use speech to text?