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Yay update
If the wheat works but doesn’t taste great as a bread, it might be useful in fermentation… Rocky soil plants need lots of roots to catch any moisture and nutrients that don’t want to stay put or deep roots to find purchase down in better conditions, maybe.
Something about Entropy. Can’t put my finger on it.
Maybe he could make a spell casting book by combining the Copy spell he made earlier with this spell pen thing. have the prepared spells in the book be the target of the copy spell and the output written using the magic pen idea and have the spine of the book have magic gathering and storage gem included so everyone can cast the spells inside. would be great to spread a bunch of basic utility type magic to the masses.
I think he should focus on some battle training, Or at least learn some Offensive Spell.
Thanks for the update!
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I stop when I smell the bread, I check it and then wait a little longer before taking it out
smell
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I believe bread also needs a little bit of honey.
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Sugar or honey. Basically, food for the yeast. May as well add a bit of salt and vegetable oil or melted butter.
I’ve noticed a pattern. Several times throughout the fic now, you’ve said one thing, then contradicted it within two sentences. The more recent examples would be when sidetracking about how much water plants do or don’t need and whether specific runes were perfect or not ideal for a spell, but it keeps happening and it’s kinda distracting every time I run across it. Remember, pick one and go with it. Contradicting yourself, especially within such short spans, drops readers out of the narrative as they have to puzzle through what you meant by the conflicting information.
I wonder if the talents in this fanfic are similar to the canon ones, like
shade can:
-draw
-cook
-make spells
-runic Magic in general
-make Wooden handicrafts
And probably more, while in the canon a pony can't do too many things