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Great chapter
Wait I thought you just said that you figured out the limit of the ring?
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Not really, he tried but it burst into flame before he could observe much, he knows the ring couldn't handle that much magic but not how far over the limit he want, I'll change the wording to better reflect that thanks.
With all of that life magic his dumping into the tree I wouldn't be surprised if it grows a face
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I rather he didn't crate a walking pine tree.
I really like how well you've built out the magic system here and that you've made him have very realistic setbacks in what he does instead of always just succeeding.
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Thank you.
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I'll fix that thank you.
Thanks for the update!
Your ‘slow’ is still very fast. I won’t complain.
Wood grains affect carving and are the result of seasonal changes in the growth process. Since Shade is magic-ing the plants to size so quickly, do they have any grains to their wood meat? I wonder if he can affect that with his life magic affiliation, and would that in turn affect the wood’s magic ability. Would it do anything to make patterns in the magic of the grains: alternating the amounts from one grain to another or producing a gradient towards the heartwood or away from it?
Shade, don’t let any timberwolves get ahold of your iron oak, please. That would be bad.
Birds do like toys. And mirrors. Does Entropy have a little bath? Slight application for the water flask: water bowl for pets. No need for ponies to have to refill those anymore? Just need a ‘stop filling at this point’ safety. No more pet spit-water to deal with.
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Thanks and I could have him mess around with wood grain, but I'll need to actually refresh myself about how all that works.
And the Idea of Entropy having a small bath is far to cute not to do.
Thanks for the suggestions and have a nice day,
I really like this story so far, it’s nice seeing your writing improve as the story goes too.
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Thank you.