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arc* not ark
An ark is a biblical ship, an arc is a section of story, part of a circle or electrical discharge
11898455
Thank you. :}
Oh, good. So our protagonist at least probably won't be risking prison time for being an accessory to a crime
Already on a path to great influence and he isn't even trying. Alicorn Shade is a definite possibility. Wonder how Griffinstone will be changed since in the base canon those two griffins would likely have been assassinated?
11898472
Probably.
Eh maybe but most important is for you to have fun while writing.
'unimportant royal'ty he says, 'probably wont affect him' he says. Colt, you aren't that lucky
HAHAHAHAHA!!
Ofcorse his vacation to a place largely populated with griffin would end with him earning the favor of there royal family...hehhehhee!
I like this.He's getting involved with griffin royalty, For better or for worse.
It was a good arc. Can't have everything be super interesting got to have some downtime. The trick is to moderate the downtime with a interesting idea or plot that may or may not lead to something. Which you have done marvelously. I have read professionally written books that failed at that.
11898509
Thanks for the advice and complement.
Hopefully he wasn’t tailed on the train. I think he’d have noticed. But if he was, maybe teleporting off the train would have been a better way to shake the potential pursuers?
Got back a few days early? Play with the new toys.
Could Silvis have a connection to Skystar or Silverstream?
As long as you plan to do something important with Phelix and Sylvis in the future, it was foreshadowing, not boring.
Great work can't wait for more
Is the dagger like the one from darksouls. The farron greatsword
11898607
Thank you.
Oh dang. There he goes changing the future when he doesn’t want to.
Life*
Shade's fake identity is a Pegasus right?
Maybe he should make himself a disguise.
The possibilities are endless!
He could change into it if he ever has to go undercover.
or he could go negotiate with important ponies face to face if he ever needs funds for rare research materials, securing alliances is always handy.
He could probably make some fake wings pretty easily.
All he has to do is reduce his weight and push air backwards while moving the wings with his field.
He could probably build up some ridiculous speed by removing all the air from in front of him (maybe with a shield in the shape of a nosecone?)
That way he can run away without having to reveal Entropy, and she can remain his emergency getaway.
All warfare is based on deception after all.
Letting his enemies think he needs to be able to fly fast in order to escape means he has an advantage.
There's also the fact that, if he ever gets into a fight indoors, his enemies would probably think a Pegasus like him would be at a disadvantage.
Then he could catch them off guard with his earth pony strength.
Nopony in the right mind would expect earth pony strength from a pony with wings, right?
With how absolutely paranoid Shade gets, I find it hard to believe he isn't the type to never go outside without a disguise.
An anti illusion detection bracelet bracelet (AIDBB) shouldn't be too hard for him to cook up either, he did design the enchantment, he's already inside the system.
He could probably have the AIDBB cause illusion detection bracelets (IDB) within range to cool down at the same speed they heat up to make it cancel out.
Like this:
IDB: heats up when an illusion is within 10 feet
AIDBB: when an IDB is between 2 and 10 feet away, cools it down to room temperature.
That way he can still use his own bracelet without having it be cancelled out
For a pony this paranoid and secretive, creating a disguise fits perfectly into his character.
But that's just my opinion.
11898641
I've thought about the same thing in a few ways but decided to leave of for later and work on more traditional forms of stealth. One of the main reasons is that while he could disguise himself as a Pegasus his size would make him on the upper limit of a unicorn, and pegasi are even smaller so that would be hard to work around.
Thanks for the suggestions.
11898662
Thank you. :}
11898644
But Blue...
Don't you see?
That's perfect!
With a few well placed facial illusions
HE COULD DISGUISE HIMSELF AS A SLIGHTLY OLDER PEGASUS!
IT'S BRILLIANT!
and then he could just get a rune to make the air in his vocal cords slightly heavier.
Because of the way sound works, lighter gases (like helium) make your voice higher and heavier gases (like sulfur hexafluoride) make your voice deeper.
This can have the double effect of making him sound different and making him sound older
And with ponies like bulk biceps going around?
It would probably take a lot for him to stand out enough to look unusual anyways, so I think it still has potential.
11898678
That’s a good point. I’ll probably give it some more thought.
11898680
Awesome
Shade is extremely mature for his age, so an older disguise just makes way too much sense not to go for.
A 14 to 16 year old inventor is a little less unusual than a 12 year old inventor
So if he ever has to meet up with a science pony, or go somewhere with the Princess.
It just makes sense to have a disguise on hoof, no?
Kek. Neato.